Love this ..beautiful....excellent lyrics...love it

Another good one Steffen! Love the arrangement and the lyrics. The most Beatles sounding song I have heard of yours.

Thanks everybody for your comments on this and other songs of mine! It's good to know that there are a couple of folks out there who like some of my songs. :) Feel free to criticize though! We all cannot get better without honest, constructive criticism. Regards, Steffen

Hello, I just signed up today, and wanted to drop in and say hello to you.... This is a nice collab that I've enjoyed since I first heard it... LG

love it agree with James........perfect as it is

I can't imagine what your standards are topping out at if you apologize for this mix. This is beautiful.

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Have you made an effort to be in touch with the film makers in your part of the world? Your state probably has a film comission. If you haven't already, I suggest you do and then begin to find about what is in the works in your state and offer to submit music to the college and independent film makers.

If I can figure out how to download this track I will add rhythm guitars.

Steffen, You have a really great bunch of musical friends. Are these people you have in your real world or do write with people from all over? What is your process? Do you swap .wav files?

Kicks ass. Love it. Wish I could do stuff like this. Sooooo poppy!

Beautiful! If this was one of your first you certainly got off to a wonderful start!

Love the guitars on this track!

Love the taste of Paris here in the summer. Especially in August when it's pretty empty. A most romantically pretty track.

beautiful tune........wonderful playing.....

incredible.

A cello with this would be so nice...or a whole bed of strings to undergird that melody.

Very nice. So clear and clean. Nice voice too. I see you collaborate with other musicians. Feel free to ask me to do background vocals.

Awesome. This reminds me of something from the Ghost in the Shell soundtrack. (I really dig that soundtrack.)

Brina really has a great voice. Very well done once again, my friend!

Hi, James! A very long time, indeed. I have not been here for years. Less and less time ... How have you been? Still busy writing new songs?

I just listened to this again (good thing about home office: you can listen to music all day long, if you want). Definitely one of my favorites of yours.

Thanks for listening and commenting, J.M.! Man, I haven't been here in a long time. Good to see that you are still active. I hope I'll find the time to listen to your new songs. I have always liked your songwriting. I guess I should update some of my uploaded songs. Greetings, Steffen

Great stuff, and what a beautiful voice!

Very unique ... and psychedelic. All your songs remind me of bands like the Small Faces and the like ...

Straight from the late 60s. :)

Sounds like we have the same taste!

Nice, old-school rock, just the way I like it.

Great songwriting!

How do you do that, coming up with one great tune after the other?

I don't want to repeat myself over and over. Kudos for another great song! :)

Thanks for listening on commenting, James! And I love it when you tell us all something about the background of your songs. I wish I'd have the time to listen more often. You are one of the last "true song writers" IMO.

No matter which song of yours I randomly play - I almost always like it! :)

You know what, I still get that Harry Chapin vibe from your song (and voice). And I LOVE Harry Chapin! This is another very, very good song, and a perfect performance.

Pretty song! :)

Hey J.L. and Bethan! Thanks for stopping by! :)

Thanks for listening! :)

@doktordoktor: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! It's actually more abandoned than finished, as I did not want to wait for real drums any longer. But I might revisit it one day and finish it off. :)

This is a nice progrock-ish composition!

Nice! :)