Love this sunny day doo,doo,doo,doo song.You have a great voice.Love the melody.And who are you walking with on this beach? Hmmm?? NH coastline perhaps??
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
I like it - are you performing it live or is this not mastered? Using an online mastering service shouldn't be too expensive to improve the quality - it's a great song, it's hard to hear it, though.
Hey - thanks for your comments on my tracks. Really enjoyed your whole record but thought I'd leave my comment here. It suits your style so well and, like you say, gotta love those train songs
Is this about a real place in your life. Very nice (You can answer by putting a message on any of my songs.) Thank you for listening to my songs and commenting.
Nice. Different in a good way. I've been doing the annual RPM challenge for February. You got me thinking maybe I should try the monthly version. Good job. Looking forward to hearing more.
Hey, I'm really liking your ambient sounds. Also, you have great volume on your tracks. I need to learn how to do that. Great work. keep 'em coming :-)
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
When I was young we lived opposite a big play area - lots of grass and trees and bushes to rampage around - and in the middle a tarmac playground with the "amusements" - a witches hat (aka umbrella), a long rocking horse with saddles along its…
Ashes and dragon's breath - bright things in the sky, childhood games, battlegrounds, cemeteries.
Lyrics:
Long long days, summer holidays, staying up late
green wood on the bonfire, we danced around the flames
street lights and stars…
You’re feeling that you’re broken
And your door’s no longer open
Don’t you ever, ever give up
For all the words unspoken
And the thoughts that were provoking
Don’t you ever, ever give up
But tonight, you have it right
So, get out there…
Preacher man, Holy man
I know who you are
Take our money you won’t get far
Take the cash, in a flash
Off in a limousine
I know who you are
Cause I know who you are
Mission man, Holy man
hand in the jar
I know who you are
Get the stash…
Nice sound. Your sound is similar to The Mighty Men and Joe "Spuds" Riekert, two guys that came onboard this year from RPM. They're cool guys and have some nice stuff. Good work :
Lately it seems, I don’t know what I’m living for
Occasionally, I feel so unsure
And I know this world holds so much more
Seems to me, don’t know who I am any more
I don’t really know what I stand for
But I’ve been held down for too long…
A simple folk style song based off the Velvet Underground's "New Age".
I was given the task to write a song quickly, by no less than a pretty girl I was talking to at the time. The influence is apparent, perhaps theft, but hopefully Dylanesque…
Comments on acoustic57's stuff
I know where you are coming from...
...like the intensity and the imagery.
Deep.Very thoughtful.
Love this sunny day doo,doo,doo,doo song.You have a great voice.Love the melody.And who are you walking with on this beach? Hmmm?? NH coastline perhaps??
Happy traveling song.I love the melody.Great Marlboro Man voice.Crank up volume.A bit hard to hear.
sounds good ! Its about your Voice. Commin through directly.
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
I like it - are you performing it live or is this not mastered? Using an online mastering service shouldn't be too expensive to improve the quality - it's a great song, it's hard to hear it, though.
Hi Dave! I like the groove on this one! Your guitar has nice tone.
Great song. I appreciate the message. "scarred the land, charred our soul"
Hey - thanks for your comments on my tracks. Really enjoyed your whole record but thought I'd leave my comment here. It suits your style so well and, like you say, gotta love those train songs
Is this about a real place in your life. Very nice (You can answer by putting a message on any of my songs.) Thank you for listening to my songs and commenting.
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Cool! Here's to 1/2 pennies, pieces of eight, flintlock pistols and strange bones.... !!!
Nice. Different in a good way. I've been doing the annual RPM challenge for February. You got me thinking maybe I should try the monthly version. Good job. Looking forward to hearing more.
Hey, I'm really liking your ambient sounds. Also, you have great volume on your tracks. I need to learn how to do that. Great work. keep 'em coming :-)
So, this is what a happy clam sounds like :-). I like it.
Cool vibe and energy on all tracks. Good work, Joe !
Nice work Tim ! And it's really cool you worked your personal common theme into "After Dark" :-) Nice job all around. Dave C.
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
Nice song. Don'y worry about accessing yourself... keep up the great music :)
Nice drive to the rhythm. Cool song. :)
:-}
Nice, I like the guitar in this and the vocals fit the mood :)
Hmm, something out of the norm.... in a really good way :)
I agree, great vocal control. Almost a yodel type voice at times. Nice how you can let your voice break and have it sound right. Good job.
Nice. I like the confidence in the vocals :)
Cool, variations on a theme happening :) Looking forward to hearing more.
Completely different...... and I like it ! :)
Once again, nice work ! Nice to hear a familiar sound and era.
Nice sound. Your sound is similar to The Mighty Men and Joe "Spuds" Riekert, two guys that came onboard this year from RPM. They're cool guys and have some nice stuff. Good work :
Nice vocals. I like the simple, open space this song has. Good job:)
Yup, definitely Dylanesque :) I like it.