Great job! Who's up for the Android challenge next?

What goes on in that mind of yours? Suspicious from now on and laughing out loud.

Oh what groovy, appropriate music! Great lyrics. Delightful vocals. What a wonderful job, and a story told so well, so fully, so... so... futuristic? Is that the word I'm looking for? I'm blown away! Thank you, Colleen!

Very creative :)

Nice lyrics!

Thanks so much everyone for your continued kind feedback and support. Meeting you all has been such a boon for me!!!! I am excited to keep moving on and learning more!!

B U R N That sensation you are feeling in your fingertips is progress. This is a big milestone for you! I'm proud of you. There is no going back now . . . no more putting up with some obnoxious guitar player who thinks he knows everything. Now the song will sound as you intended it. I think those chord changes sound darn good and the ukulele turns out to be an excellent accompaniment for your voice. *** For those who have not met Penelope, I'll just say she is a REAL LOOKER! Spruce top and block inlays just like my Gibson SG Custom ***

Besides a great voice you write really outstanding lyrics......congratulations on starting to learn the uke...sounds nice to hear you accompanying your self...what's next guitar? mandolin? piano?...

I know I keep saying this, but... you have a sweet voice. That's a cool story. But I think the first time I heard a song written about an instrument was Stephen L. Krell singing about one of his vintage electric. Yours however was far less noisy! ;) Good job, Colleen, and that's some nice poetry!

Colleen. I assume that you know of the Tadpole Angel… I think that you should take a shot at Doc's Concerto of the Great Southland!… I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'm talking about but, if not, send me an email

Oh this is nicey nice. Love yur vox.

Lovely voice

Thanks to all for such supportive feedback! You are just the best!!!!

Great voice, great song with outstanding lyrics Love it Colleen!!

Beautiful song Colleen! Great way to start the challenge.

You have a sweet voice.

I can relate.

*Another example where the whole is greater than the sum of it's parts* I think this live version is better than anything we could have ever cooked up in my basement no matter how much wine we drank. Thanks to Gene's help, this remix has a lot more definition. Bottom line, it's better when everyone comes together to contribute.

Thanks to Gene for his help! This new version sounds much better!!!!!

Hi Gene! Thanks for the offer. I sent you a separate message with my contact info. I'd appreciate it very much!

Ohhhhh!!!! I love this love song of yours!!!! I saw it too, and hugged my little Finny boy (doggie)

My sentiments exactly!

Yummy

Wow..... a truly lovely piece. I love this!!! Instant fav!! The electro vibe is a cool change of pace

This is sort of scary...!! Looking over my shoulder for sure

Merry Christmas Gang!!! Hugs and love to all from the northland

Wow!!!! This is really cool... both your beautiful singing and the music behind it. Love it!!!!

I could listen to this gorgeous music all day

Sobering and haunting... your voice is awesome on this one

Beautiful acoustic sound! What a beautiful song to let your heartache out. The emotion is raw.

Oops that last comment was me... forgot to sign in. Merry Christmas!

yup.... we all need to go find a warm beach in the sun somewhere.

Does this mean you owned the strip joint???? You sly dog!! Or I bet strip joint means something else there in England.... :-)

Love your vocals on this one!!!

love this positive message... really beautiful and spare arrangement. Love this!

I just love this... inspires me to get going on some writing. Love the pretty picking and the whistle is the perfect touch.

You're so right Greg!!!!! I'm glad you reminded me of this one. A perfect sentiment indeed

sounds fab!!!

Okay... I totally LOVE this song!!!! What fun to write from those prompts and come up with this happy masterpiece.

Love that minor key vibe!