Am I the only one who thinks this recording needs to be cranked up to between -10 and -15 dbs? I have the tools to boost this and at the same time eliminate any hiss/floor noise that might get boosted as well, if y'all are interested. Just say, "go for it" and tell me where to send the edited file.

Greta tune Colleen...I love the lyrics, you guys sound really good together...wish I could have been there to jam....

You two are on a roll. Very nice-- to all in your group… always love mandolins.

Outstanding . . . I can hear Melissa and the rest of us harmonizing. Colin's bass is keeping us together and Scott's mandolin just brings it over the top. Great song and lots of fun!

Can't wait to hear your live version of this!

Does it for me....

My wife would love this.

When I get a chance, I'll play along with my harp to see how it sounds with it. Nice sound!

Ha!! Thanks Greg! Looks what happens when you show me how to use the mixer tools!!!

I start smiling every time your voice pans to the other speaker. That's fun! Nice song. Andrew has the stuff. I think he's right on, although it may not stop Colin and I adding a little something. Think of it as putting plastic Pink Flamingos in the yard. It may not add much, but you just feel good about it.

Thanks so much Gene! I really appreciate the supportive feedback.

I agree with what Andrew Russe -- this one doesn't need anything else!

Thanks Andrew! Much appreciated!

I know you can probably hear the "other stuff" - but I kinda like these unaccompanied ones, your voice easily carries the whole thing.

What a voice! Looking forward to hearing more.

Beautiful stuff

Uplifting loveliness.

That's some beautiful piano...beautiful vocal too...

Soooo pretty.

There you go. Nice with an English muffin and a cuppa - Hawaiian blend.

Thanks for the kind words Greg and the Proods! Fun to try something a little out of my normal mode of writing.

This is a great addition to the challenge. Lots of really cool things going on in this song. Love the bridge / chorus!!! Great vocals.

Came back for a second helping!!!

I love your vocal harmonies. These are great lyrics!! (I always wanted to be Madonna too! Desperately Seeking Susan hooked me for good). Great song you wonderful Proods!!! A total instant fav!

Wonderful story telling. Another great song! Thanks for posting this one even if it battled you!!

Oh Yeah!!!!!!!! I remember this one! That was a lot of fun. Great song John!

Raw and powerful! This speaks volumes in its simplicity... Sending healing thoughts and strength as this evokes someone battling an illness...

great way to start the morning! Get the FUNK OUT!!!

Now that's telling it like it is!!! Love this. Awesome!!

Hauntingly beautiful and sad. Evocative lyrics. Really pulls you in. Love the piano

Feeling some Elvis here! Nice!!!

This song just totally moved me. WOW!

Enjoying a dip into a playlist by you! Your music is just awesome! Thanks for my Sunday afternoon soundtrack.

This is awesome! I love the guitar riff. Perfect backdrop for your strong lyrics and heartfelt vocals. Another amazing addition to Who Knew!!

love the lyrics of this song! Really cool way your beautiful voice winds in and out. Great one!

This is really a cool song... some essence of Bowie coming to me. Your vocals are really haunting. In times where we're listening and giving accolades in this digital media, know that your music brings us all together! Although I will admit to a fantasy of bringing all us alone toners together live for the funnest jam session ever! Thanks for this great song!!! An instant fav

Came back for another listen. This one is really a fav!!!!

Somehow you guys make even creepy subject matter sound happy! Love the vibe on this. Who Knew that this challenge would bring out such different stories in every song's approach to the topic. Great one!

Love the songwriting challenge! Lots of fun!!!!! Thanks Greg!

"Ain't feelin' it!" What a great line! I love this one!