Song idea
Lyrics:
Lights
Daddy wil carry me
If I pretend to sleep
Nights
Covered in anything
My God is listening
Now
Letting my fingers slip
Couldn’t hold on to it
Bow
Facing mortality
Breaking up physically
Severed…
The lyrics of this song,
as they pertain to plot,
are my exact memory of the event.
I had spoken to the kid maybe a minute before the "action" started about how the pressure of the water was very strong. He was nestled down with his back…
NAAD -Just read your lyrics and liatend.to the son...w
Very beautiful, very moving...beautiful how you he'd on the rhyme scheme an dmade it work...so love the slave t rhymes as well...they're my favorite...super smooth transitions....tell me a bit about the inclusion of you garden reflections in the middle of the song...counter point? Balancing urgency and reality? Love, love, love thisnone...will.ha r to listen again.
"tell me a bit about the inclusion of you garden reflections in the middle of the song...counter point?" it all ties in when I relate it to the weather, "...there's lightning and thunder...but this summer is a wash...what we really need is rain." The reason the river was up that day was because there had been so much rain in the previous days, they were lowering the dam to lower the water lever in the lake that fed this river.
Back to basics here. recorded with the Yeti mic.
Ramblin' round your city,ramblin' round your town
I never see a friend I know
As I go ramblin' round boys
As I go ramblin' round
My sweetheart and my parents I left in my old hometown…
September 2023 A-side
We sailed up to the shore some island we don't know
We dropped our anchor then we left the boat
I know we're risking all but this is worth the chance
Just think of all the wealth we'll take back home
We'll be fine…
Refuge into the imagination:
Is it crazy?
Is it survival?
Is desire to survive crazy?
THERE SHE WAS Key - G 102811
G
She'd been gone for three years now so he'd been on the road
Playing every truck stop bar and every song he…
Dang dude, I love it…🤠❤️🤠…just got on this site and read then listened to you sing this song…I’m gonna be 49 next month and just reading it pulled me in to listen to it…I’m a total ROOKIE…but I have a voice and blues everything that I’d kill this into a song… BUT NOT just one song I’d make three songs out of this whole thing…so the first two songs…I’d leave no ending…only to have people waiting and wanting more..to later on the radio station would get so many requests the DJays… would be forced into playing the 2nd and third part to get to the climax… of a brilliant Ending❤️❤️🤠🤠❤️❤️😎😎.. feel free to reach out to me through this dam computer stuff..HELL JAMIE H…… $$$ living in Baycity Michigan…EMPATH you later.zz
Refuge into the imagination:
Is it crazy?
Is it survival?
Is desire to survive crazy?
THERE SHE WAS Key - G 102811
G
She'd been gone for three years now so he'd been on the road
Playing every truck stop bar and every song he…
your wurli floating glide touch is quite solid, sir - very, very nice
and yes, synth, please
(greetings from the dead, who might be in the process of rising again k&w ;-) )
wasn't expecting this - but quite fine, sir :)
it's quite obvious we need to catch up on what you've been doing
(them dead people ain't quite dead yet) k&w;-)
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Well done. A smooth and heartfelt ballad. BTW, thanks for listening to my songs.
NAAD -Just read your lyrics and liatend.to the son...w Very beautiful, very moving...beautiful how you he'd on the rhyme scheme an dmade it work...so love the slave t rhymes as well...they're my favorite...super smooth transitions....tell me a bit about the inclusion of you garden reflections in the middle of the song...counter point? Balancing urgency and reality? Love, love, love thisnone...will.ha r to listen again. "tell me a bit about the inclusion of you garden reflections in the middle of the song...counter point?" it all ties in when I relate it to the weather, "...there's lightning and thunder...but this summer is a wash...what we really need is rain." The reason the river was up that day was because there had been so much rain in the previous days, they were lowering the dam to lower the water lever in the lake that fed this river.
Nice !!! For people crossing the Rio Grande, I reckon these lyrics are still relevant!
Excellent! It's menacing and calming at the same time.
Darn catchy, fun listen!
This friggin' rocks! Love the thick, sludgy, dirty sound. Great mix too. Epic song (both parts)!
Nice one!
This is a sweet piece!
long dark stuff ... I think I like it!!
Ah,the old days of playing guitar! Stop on by and see what I've been doing.
I expected this just to keep going.. WOW 😲
Dang dude, I love it…🤠❤️🤠…just got on this site and read then listened to you sing this song…I’m gonna be 49 next month and just reading it pulled me in to listen to it…I’m a total ROOKIE…but I have a voice and blues everything that I’d kill this into a song… BUT NOT just one song I’d make three songs out of this whole thing…so the first two songs…I’d leave no ending…only to have people waiting and wanting more..to later on the radio station would get so many requests the DJays… would be forced into playing the 2nd and third part to get to the climax… of a brilliant Ending❤️❤️🤠🤠❤️❤️😎😎.. feel free to reach out to me through this dam computer stuff..HELL JAMIE H…… $$$ living in Baycity Michigan…EMPATH you later.zz
mmm,made my ears feel funny too! when you get a chance stop by...
Still GREAT!!
Cory Michael -I listened to the song and think you should definitely sing it next week. You're a hell of a story teller, James!
your wurli floating glide touch is quite solid, sir - very, very nice and yes, synth, please (greetings from the dead, who might be in the process of rising again k&w ;-) )
wasn't expecting this - but quite fine, sir :) it's quite obvious we need to catch up on what you've been doing (them dead people ain't quite dead yet) k&w;-)
Excellent
That's really some good stuff there..
hot tune for a.m. :)