Here is my contribution to the latest song writing challenge posted in the Alonetone Forum.
Who Knew when I first met you
That all your troubles would be mine
And you’d be coming around again
To hurt me one more time
It’s been a lot of blustery weather
Almost like being tossed by the sea
And I see that storm cloud building
And it looks like it’s heading for me
Who knew that I would love you
After what you did to me
Who knew you’d hurt me again & again
For what seems like an eternity
I got only one oar in the water
But I’m rowing just as fast as I can
I’m just moving round in circles
I see you coming round again
I have only one thing to ask you
Honey would you’d be so kind
Please wont you let me down easy
When you decide to leave me next time
Great tune Greg!
This is cool
Sounds like it belongs on Nashville Skyline...nice one, Greg!
wow nice job...I gotta get moving on my Who Knew...
Good tune. Suits your style.
Oh yeah, that works for me.
I love the country twang sound... way to go!
Love the songwriting challenge! Lots of fun!!!!! Thanks Greg!
Thought I'd commented on this. Anyway, gave me an excuse to come back for another listen. Like this a lot.
Another winner!! great job Greg
Top quality post. Written, produced and played perfectly
Who knew, I would love this song, after all I wrote one too. But I like yours more better, It makes me more Blue!
goddamit...Very nicely done. Are you familiar with Mike Nesmith's solo stuff?
That last guest was me! Forgot to sign in. Love this one Greg!!
This is awesome!!!!! I makes me think of a tenor Johnny Cash! I love it. Great vocals and wonderful melody!!! Great submission to the Who Knew challenge
The song verse is very poetic and lovely. I personally would love to hear it sung as quiet so without the background singing. Also would like to hear it without the twang.