Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
Feeling in love Grin no better feeling .... Tried drums bass rhythm guitar and even a bit of lead oh ! and not forgetting the organ....but jumped in a bit too early at the start but hey!! i'm trying...Thanks for listening
This is a rough cut, but I like it. Here are the lyrics:
TOMORROW WILL BE YOU
It’s been a long time since I saw you
I’m at a loss for words
But when I heard the news
I went straight to your room
There’s no point in looking…
Here is my entry for the "Who Knew" Song Writing Challenge. Thanks for including me :)
Lyrics:
When I was a young boy
I never knew what it meant
to be unloved
When I was a young man
I never knew what it meant
to be undone
Now I’m…
was bored and had no instruments at hand so went here again http://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=7444.0
music
by
henwrench
words
by
oldrottenhead
i have blossomed in darkness
i have festered in the pulchritude of night…
I decided this was a good song to post on Thanksgiving as a way to say thanks to all the folks on AloneTone for listening to my music over these past few years. This is another song in the studio work I've been doing this year. We're still tinkering…
Thanks for listening Greg, Stoman and Proods. I'm not a talented musician like you guys. I'm just glad to have the opportunity to get some ideas out there, some funny and some serious. I have a bit of imagination and can write a few lyrics, but all of the sounds are produced from the GarageBand app. I'm surprised and happy that people are entertained and acknowledge me. Thank you again.
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Thanks Proods
OH Yeah!....again. Really tight groove, man.
Thanks fairynuff
Thanks Tom. Happy you are liking it!
Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Haha : )
Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.
This one ended well before I was ready... more of this please! Well done & thanks for sharing. ~Michael
ok you caught me, I was tapping my big toes
Thanks for listening Proods. : )
Great!
Thanks Greg.
Good stuff. That guitar sounds great.
Thank you. You are too kind : )
Great FUN!!!! Well done! So unique, and I listened through twice.
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
Thanks James : )
Cool. Dig the irreverence. Smart ass attitude!
Very kind Radio Roswell!
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Very good. Imaginative track.
Really good. This is a great arrangement Steffen.
Amazing vocals! Bright and happy song. Like it!
Thanks Colleen and Jim. Appreciate you listening.
Very clever and funny! Nice one guys.
An electronic western. Very cool Johnny!
Emotional and thought provoking Nick. Very good.
Great voice and soulful song Nick. Good job!
Atmospheric and effective. Like the way it develops
This is great. Rhythmic and clever lyrics too!
Like this.
Very cool. Sounds like a premonition.
Nice and bright sound, great echo.
Lovely song Ed.
Nice job Jim. Thoughtful and pleasant tones.
Very nice and melodic
What a beautiful song! Thanks for sharing Colleen, and Happy Thanksgiving to you too!
I don't know the song, but nicely performed Tom.
Thanks for listening Greg, Stoman and Proods. I'm not a talented musician like you guys. I'm just glad to have the opportunity to get some ideas out there, some funny and some serious. I have a bit of imagination and can write a few lyrics, but all of the sounds are produced from the GarageBand app. I'm surprised and happy that people are entertained and acknowledge me. Thank you again.
This is great! Everything sounds just right.