Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
Collaboration that I did with Beatwavecr. He composed the music, and I had done the vocals/lyrics. (September 2018 -- I fine-tuned the vocals and levels just slightly, but am trying to resist any further bouts of OCD.)
Lyrics :
[verse 1…
It's been a while...
This song was recorded with another verse, it ties the song together nicely but who the heck wants to listen to a 5 minute song about depressing stuff? We're really looking forward to feedback from those of you who've like…
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Thanks Proods
OH Yeah!....again. Really tight groove, man.
Thanks fairynuff
Thanks Tom. Happy you are liking it!
Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Haha : )
Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.
This one ended well before I was ready... more of this please! Well done & thanks for sharing. ~Michael
ok you caught me, I was tapping my big toes
Thanks for listening Proods. : )
Great!
Thanks Greg.
Good stuff. That guitar sounds great.
Thank you. You are too kind : )
Great FUN!!!! Well done! So unique, and I listened through twice.
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
Thanks James : )
Cool. Dig the irreverence. Smart ass attitude!
Very kind Radio Roswell!
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Impressive guitar work and very listenable. Super!
Cool groove, melodic and strange too. Nice job!
Like the song guys, reminiscent of a 60s sound to me. nice to hear from you again.
Thanks Tom. I have another almost done, and also one you might want to work with. : )
Nice acoustic cover, your voice and guitar strips the song back and gives it some soul!
Melancholic but engaging and beautiful at the same time
I’m happy that you enjoyed it Psychic Sperm. : )
Glad you liked it Jason!
Thank you Fudgetusk
Thanks Brett
Haha! Thanks for listening Tom. I enjoyed making it, and it became a bit more light hearted as I went along.
Impressive cover Tom! Great atmosphere and emotion shows through here. Very nice!
Nice cover Tom. I think your voice is great for this song. Great sound!
Thanks guest. : )
Like this a lot. You express the feeling very convincingly and bring the words to life. Great!
Thanks keycrazy. I try to keep it interesting. I’m grateful to you for listening carefully and commenting on my music.
Suits your style well. Tom will be applauding from heaven I reckon. Good job!
Beautiful acoustic song Tom. Great performance!
Really nice sound and feel to this. Wish I could sing as well as you Tom! Great!
Atmospheric sound and great vocals Tom! The chord syncing sounds difficult but you made an excellent job of it. Great job!