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back in this cold house:- with video

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Had to do this one on the fly before an open mic night….

Sorry about the quality…

Came up with the song this morning ……

One take… GTR+MIC on one tracks (doubled up), Played live….

Not much time to record music or look at the site recently…….. :(

Back In This Cold House
Words and Music by Tharek Mokbul

Lyrics
See you ain’t strong for saying,
I was wrong for staying
Back in this cold house
I’m praying now….
Now the Flames are gone… (Repeat line…)

I hear this record play
and I can feel it fading
Back in this cold house
I’m Kneeling now
Fading All Along…. (Repeat Line….)

Your tears have dried and left a stain
Which shows your anger.
Back in this cold house
I see it now
I saw it all along… (Repeat line…)

We’ll meet in memories for now.
In dreams outstanding.
Back in this cold house
I’m sleeping now…
I’ll Lay until our dawn…. (Repeat line)

See you ain’t strong for saying, (And so on…)

Keith Landry's avatar
Keith Landry said

Beautiful opening picking, Tharek! What a genuine voice... Talk about honest music. Wow. I have a feeling that your music will soon begin to influence mine in some pretty profound ways.

Johnny Stone's avatar
Johnny Stone said

Nice mate RAW is good dig it very much.

quill's avatar
quill said

Another coffeehouse I wish I'd been at. I agree with Gary Essex about the size of this song. Wonderful - and I think the recording is beautiful. I feel like it gives me the room I need to listen.

Guest said

Great take!! The song is bigger than itself...

Dave Berry's avatar
Dave Berry said

just brilliant songwriting Tharek. This is my new favorite of yours.

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Tharek Ali Mokbul said

Thanks!!!! It means an aweful lot to me!

Guest said

Fantastic melody - just brilliant! Kudos!

corbinSound's avatar
corbinSound said

awesome song! this this progression

Guest said

Love this track, everything about it. Maybe the rawness you hear is the vulnerability I hear. If you re-do it, please don't destroy this version - it lives! Truly.

Tharek Ali Mokbul's avatar
Tharek Ali Mokbul said

thanks guys. . . I thought i didn't do to well on this track. A bit too raw. . Thanks for the listens.

launched's avatar
launched said

Sweeeeeeeeeet!!!!

Guest said

what a beaut. I'm going to have to download your tracks Tharek. You've got some great, great, great material.

Guest said

Real FNG! I wish I could have your voice.

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Galileo's Cough Drop said

Muy excellente! (And playing with conviction and passion makes up for any lack of recording perfection, IMO.)

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Sandy Gritt said

This is QUALITY in every way. No need to apologize. You is da man.

Norm's avatar
Norm said

Well done. Great voice! The story itself is well told - almost tough to listen to. I hope the house warms back up!

quill's avatar
quill said

Wow. Whatever you do with this song, however you might record it or produce it or refine it, I hope you always have this recording of your song - it's wonderful. I would have enjoyed being at that open house.

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Wildgeas Music said

The lyrics, the song, create a real dramatic scene. Well done T.

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Wildgeas Music said

Very pleasurable tune. 5 stars!

Guest said

This is a fantastic song! Performance is also wonderful, but, oh my, amazing, top notch song-writing!

Guest said

Good one.

Guest said

This morning? oh boy, I wish I could do that. It's a great song.

launched's avatar
launched said

Man, another killer tune, bro!! The upper register vox are very very nice! Sweet guitar playing as usual!

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da gubbamint said

Sweet! Remind me of dat Stairway to Heaven. You is one talented MF.

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Reefwalker said

whoooo, love the lyrics, It sounds good, Great for a rushed 1st take !

Dave Berry's avatar
Dave Berry said

Such incredible feeling here, spooky really, its got the spook brother. It feels like the real deal.

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