I noted that Greg Conner, whose opinion I've come to trust, had commented on this song, so I came by for a listen. You've won a new fan -- I'll be following you hear-after. This is a gorgeous song -- the strumming, the picking, the vocals, the lyrics, the mix down/mastering job -- it's all beautiful! Great job -- Rock on!
Entry #4 RPM 2013
The Man
There he stands, shaking hands
smiling wide with his joker smile
promises spew out of his mouth
do you believe
all he wants to do is steal the breath that feeds your child
he don’t care
he don’t give a dam
he’s…
Entry #2 RPM 2013
Mama Please
She falls flat on her face
she’s totally spaced
she has no disgrace
her life is a waste
she has no respect
she’s so full of hate
she drinks from morning till it’s very late
she’s living in hell
she’s trapped…
Entry #1 RPM 2013
Anything for You
Some rise early, some rise late
Some're up til morning light, some go to bed at eight
I'll be there baby whenever you tell me to
I guess you know by now, I'll do anything for you
Some like to rock, some…
My first completed 2013 RPM track. Thanks to Kavin for turning a simple acoustic song into what you hear today.
ONE LAST DANCE
I never got to tell you what's been on my mind
It might be just as well now that we're running out of time…
January challenge songwriting fun...
WATER UNDER WATER
So near the surface
So near the end
So near the purpose
Time and again
Just barely breathing
I’ll need you when
I’m floating in the water under water
Holding on loosely
Without letting…
Well, this started with a ukulele riff and then kind of took off from there. I enjoyed rockin' with the uke ... added a guitar rhythm, a bass track some drums and vocals and here we go! I've played in a few bars over the years and have seen my…
I'm a teacher, a parent of elementary school children, a mental health advocate, and a pacifist. It's been a rough week... But there's still time.
TIME
Time to look in the mirror
Time to say what we believe
Is this the world we want…
Maybe the last for 2012 Reg got the Acoustic out on this one and a touch of guitar fx for the vocal hope you enjoy.......Happy New Year....Although Reg is a miserable sod........
Maybe the last for 2012 Reg got the Acoustic out on this one and a touch of guitar fx for the vocal hope you enjoy.......Happy New Year....Although Reg is a miserable sod........
Comments on Movement To Contact's stuff
Diggin' the dynamics. Perfect mix on the drum kit.
The neighbors seem quite happy to hear you again M.T.C. :) Crank it up.
That woke me up! Slammin' guitars man. I should have expected it :)
Brutally good. If you had added 3 min 44 sec more to this collection this would have been a top RPM album too :-)
Very atmospheric
Excellent guitar doubling
Awesome how the song develops
Great riffage and composition :)
Thumbs up!
Fab album enjoyed it all Thanks!!
She was a lass ....
Love it !!
This one gets the ooooh yeahs going from the start....
A great start!!
luv it digging the bass and drums.
Great song!
Nice work out! Top notch performance and mix-down. Digging that strong bass.
I noted that Greg Conner, whose opinion I've come to trust, had commented on this song, so I came by for a listen. You've won a new fan -- I'll be following you hear-after. This is a gorgeous song -- the strumming, the picking, the vocals, the lyrics, the mix down/mastering job -- it's all beautiful! Great job -- Rock on!
Beautiful song.
you should sing more man..your voice is soothing
Comments made by Movement To Contact
Mmmmmm crunchy
Love that low end jammin, cool beat to this one.
Nice chilled out track to open your RPM!
Damn that trem is killer with the acoustic guitar. Excellent work gents. Smooth smooth smooth. Fav'd.
Carried away by this one Richard. Good luck on the RPM, might have to wait and hear the album as a finished piece. :) No spoliers!
The heavy parts are bad a$$ !
Dude! NICE!
Now that is some damn fine jammin. Loved it! Rage on!
Excellent songmenship here Keith. Really enjoying the chord/vocal progressions.
Yeah buddy, me like.
Nice soothin Uke jammin :)
Floating away with it. Awesome. Love the wild west train track tappin keeping the beat.
I like the two chords leading into the chorus. Nice song to be slamming back a few.
Nice one!
Most excellent!
Thank you for this Keith. Very moving track my friend.
Love the gritty lead track hovering into the mix. Very nice work!
Very zepplin-ish...and that is a very good thing...very good indeed.
Way to blow those lungs out man. A++ :)
@ :50 the world turns a bit faster. Very much enjoyed. The interplay of the guitar,keys and strings works perfect.