I wonder how these would sound with my style of old rock and roll? No pun intended.

nice...

great stuff

ZOMBIE MILKMAN!

:)

diggin the vibes very chill

Go away for a little while and look what happens. Well done indeed.

Thank you so much folks for your comments, they're very encouraging!

First let me say that this is wonderful, especially for someone who keeps claiming that things "are a mystery to me". :) When it comes to song form, I'd say it's a big fat "it depends". Probably most of the time, you would want one section to lead into another via some... thread? So this could mean anything from like a chord progression, a melody, lyrical content, even instrumentation I'd think. But then again, you may also find that you can get the emotional impact you want by having an abrupt change from one section to another. It all depends, eh. :) That said, I think you did a fine job on the transitions between verse and chorus on this piece. They're different enough that they sound like independent sections, yet lead well from one to another. As for harmony, I want to say that it was Aaron Copland who said something pithy along the lines of "There's no such thing as dissonance - it just means you haven't heard enough of it." Personally, I feel like the chord/melody at about :45 and 1:28 are a little too clashy for my tastes. Though it's such a blip in the grand scheme of the song and not all that noticeable, even for someone who's looking for it. I'd say you have a good ear for picking the right patches and effects to make a piece really gel as a whole. And I'm impressed because it sounds like you're really progressing with each new piece you release. Keep 'em coming!

I'm really digging all the layers and melodies. The rhythm section moves very nicely too. Loving where your music has been going over the past several months.

How very inventive of you. Nice track!

yes, where is Michael, my talking car?

Knightrider and Abba!

Nice one mate this is cool and thanks for your recent comments

ca 3:00, nice break, breath!

Damn fine or my name isn't Kintekobo - The wolf with a dressing up box!

Nice, I'm ready to rally.

I'd love to hear you do more with this- cool beat

A weeks gap has given me a little more perspective on this track and I've found more to like about it. Also in the light of my next track I can see this as an experiment with a new form. I doubt I'll do anything more with this but I can rest easier about it now ;-)

really like this song. reminds me of a similar message I was working on too. check it out if you get a sec, I'd be curious what you think. Nice beats. http://alonetone.com/grandelement/tracks/stay-in-union

Welcome Seth :)

Perfect Sunday morning track.

Oh man that was great.

ack...foo... no edits... channelling...

I believe Sister is channel the shorts... or something :)

That was rather fun :)

Love your sound.

Love this.

I enjoyed this one very much.

Cool sound.

What an awesome track, I love this.

Awesome track man, this puts me in mind of my beloved Apollo: Atmospheres & Soundtracks. Kudos to you!

Very chilled. Bring on the full track.

I'm really liking your stuff and happy to see a fellow Logic user!

Uploaded a new version which fixes the drums although there's still a feedback problem (related to MIDI timing I think) that needs to be fixed in a final mix.

Okay this is the problem with mixing being "throw a mastering channel strip on it, bounce, upload". At some point about the 2 minute mark the drums track have cut out - probably overloaded Reaktor again. So then you get 2:30 that is largely just the bass.

When you do this kind of track it evokes a feeling of travelling without moving. It reminds me of being a passenger in a car on a motorway at night, slightly tired and letting the world glide, carelessly, past me. I've always liked that feeling.

Fabulous sound. Liked this one very much.

I love the hauntingly distant piano's you've created here. Very much.

I was so totally there. Awesome.