Really, really nice

Way to smash it all together. Don't take that the wrong way. That's the only word I could think of right now. You have a much better grasp of music than me.

So lovely, I hope someone or sometwo take you up on it!

This is a great piece. When i find time i will try some guitar with it :D

a nice love song with some fun effects thrown in. I lot of character to this gives it a unique sound and personal touch. Great work by all involved.

It is a great mix on such fine song. Great vocal performance.

I am a fan of oriental sounding music, but the flute is so gorgeous in there. Love your melody. Delicious!

Fantastic mix.

Lovely stuff - warming.

thanks for the mix Steffen, great work mate!

And the ending is extra super double freakin' awesome! Great, cute tune.

Fantastic. Great lyrics. Strangely Beatlesque.

pretty - very nice song

b-o-w-i-e! (ish)...huge fan here

wow...great recording...love that lead guitar track...ande vocals...its all there

This is a rough demo?! Sounds perfect to me...!

I love this! Sounds like Bowie doing the vox! A beautiful, mysterious track that reminds me a bit of the songs from 'Cabaret'. It's completely wonderful.

Another touch of class and another critic"."................mmmm.........mmmmmm.......no I have got one

The vocal solo is excellent ha ha heed a classic Steffen

Oh the critic........it's too bloody good......

Oh, look there, an unknown Beatles song! Are you a relative of John Lennon's? ;) Very well done! Regards, Steffen

Wonderful - would be perfect for a sad movie. Great playing. Regards, Steffen

I don't understand a word, but it sounds great! :)

Wow, is that a banjo? Great playing! The music is actually cheerful, but the lyrics deal with a serious topic - and somehow it fits together and sounds just right.

It took a while, but then it started to grab me. The lyric is great, as always. Unfortunately I don't understand every word in the slow part.

Sounds like you could have a great future in the film music genre. :) Regards, Steffen

Beautiful songwriting and a most emotional performance. Another favorite, no doubt.

Your songs sound radio-ready to me. Brit-pop/rock with a very modern sound. Regards, Steffen

Thanks everybody for your comments on this and other songs of mine! It's good to know that there are a couple of folks out there who like some of my songs. :) Feel free to criticize though! We all cannot get better without honest, constructive criticism. Regards, Steffen

You have everything a good songwriter needs: A guitar, a voice, and a bunch of great stories to tell. Regards, Steffen

Solid job, as always, James! I really dig your singing. Regards, Steffen

On this song you sound even more like Chapin. Great song btw - lead vocals are too loud, but awesome job nonetheless. The backing vocals are brilliant. The whole song is brilliant!

You sound a bit like Harry Chapin, did you know that? And just to make that clear: I love Harry Chapin! :) Regards, Steffen

A wonderful song, James, and I love the harmony vocals. Regards, Steffen

This could well be a Jimmy Buffet song. Have I said that before? ;) Regards, Steffen

Hey, nice to meet you here! :) I remember this song - you posted it at Songcrafters some time ago. Great blues voice! Regards, Steffen

Nice one, James! I wish I was able to just grab a guitar and hum along. But I'm still trying to learn the basics on guitar (that Dm chord kills me - my hands are too big), and I cannot sing a single note. Regards, Steffen

I love the piano! :)

Exactly what I like! Awesome vocals. :)

Yes, there is definitely a bit of blues in it. Nice song, Geir! Regards, Steffen