Nice guitar playing! You got the touch Andrew!

Great work! I can hear the Tull influence but also reminiscent of Gordon Lightfoot... If you remember him?!

Wow... your vocals on this are just perfect. I hear that Jethro Tull influence there. Really pretty guitar playing.

Great stuff the lyrics moved me and I take pride In being a stoic The picking style is driving in an old timey way This is really fine good work , Andrew

I as a stage hand for 25 years and this song is like something from a traveling broadway musical. I worked Fantom, Beaty and The Beast, Jeckle and Hyde, Spam-a-Lot. Many many. This song is perfect as the whole cast comes back on stage to form a choir as they exit fading.

This song just reeks with sadness. Completely different voice from Edith. The starkness really works in the one.

Andrew, Thank you for keeping up with me lately. I just spent three hours coming up with that one minute. It took me that long to think of something to say. Thanks for commenting. 82 degrees in Cowtown and time to take the puppies for a walk. Thanks again for listening and commenting.

Another keeper. I love the guitar playing. It’s one positive thing that has come out of this mess that everyone is in. Some great music is surfacing.

Deep thoughts about being responsible. Great fguitar finger picking.

Thanks so much for the background notes. You are so right.... now I love it even more. And it sounds like you are an amazing friend as well... but no surprise there!!!! Hugs to you !!

This is a great composition and the production top notch! Excellent work!

Wow..... just wow. Between the shoebox and the broom closet there is a magic Songwriting genius machine. This one choked me up. So so sad and so well done.

I dig it!

You is the most important word in songs. I learned that from a poet named Shannon Elizabeth on Facebook. Thank you for telling me more. Once we've captured a story in a song some of the confusion from the time is illuminated. We don't ave to cling to is, so as not to lose the memories.

What a fine vocal. The intensity! And that very folky guitar snags me deep. So many stabs at the heart in your lyric. Trying to figure out who You" is.

It was definitely worth perservering with - love the melancholic vibe

Great songwriting here. Reminds me of Verve Pipe, very good.

Good one mate, I know where you're coming from, glad I'm not alone on the swearing and Take 550 ...... ' get it right you useless ******* ' or words to that effect I always use ....

Well you’ve proved to yourself your not “crap” reminds me of something my father would say to me time and time again “ don’t touch that you’ll break it “ and I normally did. Pleased you saved this one from the shoe box an excellent lyric love it pie pod bound along with all your others 😁

You're currently writing amazing songs that make my heart hurt a bit. If that didn't happen, I'd like them even more. That's the trouble with fantastic songwriters.

Wow! This works. Nice one folks.

Aww this is fabulous

NICE. It's got a wonderful feel to it. Love the "Doo-do-do-doo" choruses.

LOVE IT I get the feeling this isn't the first version of this that I've heard? Have you posted a different version before?

The guitars have a particularly nice bite on this one. And like Ms Sky says... You ROCK Looking forward to hearing more

Rocks, big time

Know the feeling!

Another thumbs up from me... (Mrs R likes your stuff too)

Yep, glorious... Love it That bass and kick is fabulous.

Loving everything you do so far. Very impressed with the drums (I'm in the same boat as you - drums are always a bit of a trial for me!)

Oh yes, like it.

Tasty, very tasty.

Nice track. Very tasty guitar solo. I like that little bass lick too. Looking forward to hearing more.

Wonderful laid back feel to this. Superb vocal locks into it perfectly. Top stuff.

Wow.

Well that's kinda scrummy... Couldn't possibly favourite it, though... Oh, go then :-)

:) Jim M does Van M

Ooooo tasty... Like it.

Love it.

Love it.