"Technopedia, Wikipedia," "My box cutter nearly hummed," "... arrived by FedEx And a big two-wheeler was required," your poetry is excellent!

Just listen in headphones. Very juicy. You really did a great job with this, Colleen -- the headphones prove you know how to mix it up! Good, clean, fun mastering job -- I'm impressed!

Fun contest! I'm trying to come up with something, but haven't had time to work on it. Good job to all of you Android builders!

Well this has indeed brought out the "best" in all of us!!!! I look forward to another crazy challenge in the future.... HA!!!

Ha Ha ...loved it.....inspired lyrics....we kind of think alike...we should put our 2 disturbed brains together....what comes out may be unpublishable though!! lol :-)

Great job! Who's up for the Android challenge next?

What goes on in that mind of yours? Suspicious from now on and laughing out loud.

Oh what groovy, appropriate music! Great lyrics. Delightful vocals. What a wonderful job, and a story told so well, so fully, so... so... futuristic? Is that the word I'm looking for? I'm blown away! Thank you, Colleen!

Very creative :)

Nice lyrics!

Thanks so much everyone for your continued kind feedback and support. Meeting you all has been such a boon for me!!!! I am excited to keep moving on and learning more!!

B U R N That sensation you are feeling in your fingertips is progress. This is a big milestone for you! I'm proud of you. There is no going back now . . . no more putting up with some obnoxious guitar player who thinks he knows everything. Now the song will sound as you intended it. I think those chord changes sound darn good and the ukulele turns out to be an excellent accompaniment for your voice. *** For those who have not met Penelope, I'll just say she is a REAL LOOKER! Spruce top and block inlays just like my Gibson SG Custom ***

Besides a great voice you write really outstanding lyrics......congratulations on starting to learn the uke...sounds nice to hear you accompanying your self...what's next guitar? mandolin? piano?...

I know I keep saying this, but... you have a sweet voice. That's a cool story. But I think the first time I heard a song written about an instrument was Stephen L. Krell singing about one of his vintage electric. Yours however was far less noisy! ;) Good job, Colleen, and that's some nice poetry!

Colleen. I assume that you know of the Tadpole Angel… I think that you should take a shot at Doc's Concerto of the Great Southland!… I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'm talking about but, if not, send me an email

Oh this is nicey nice. Love yur vox.

Lovely voice

Thanks to all for such supportive feedback! You are just the best!!!!

Great voice, great song with outstanding lyrics Love it Colleen!!

Beautiful song Colleen! Great way to start the challenge.

Another beauty!!!!

I wish I could get Ron and Fairynuff to MN!!!

Lovely!! Thank you!

Passion!!!!!!! Love it!!!

Perfect Sunday morning fare!!!!

Wow... This is amazing. Your vocals are superb!!! Really a haunting melody. Love it John!!

This one crept up on me.... love it! Sneaky rumbly car sounds in there too... Great lyrics!!!

You write the best lyrics!!!!!!!!! Love this one!

Cool vibes on this one.... Makes me want to find a nice warm breezy beach

Wow! This is really beautiful. Sweeps you right up and away... Thanks!

Always love to hear your music! Good stuff

This mellow tune is just the ticket

Congrats on your RPM! Great stuff as always.

I like this one!!!!

Sweet rendition!

A beauty! Maybe some big fish in that pond.... that bridge sounded like a big gar or shark. Cool stuff!

Beautiful name and a lovely song to go with it! Congrats to you!

This is totally awesome!!!!

That's a fun one!!!

Is that Greg C singing the blues? Great song!!!