Great job! Who's up for the Android challenge next?

What goes on in that mind of yours? Suspicious from now on and laughing out loud.

Oh what groovy, appropriate music! Great lyrics. Delightful vocals. What a wonderful job, and a story told so well, so fully, so... so... futuristic? Is that the word I'm looking for? I'm blown away! Thank you, Colleen!

Very creative :)

Nice lyrics!

Thanks so much everyone for your continued kind feedback and support. Meeting you all has been such a boon for me!!!! I am excited to keep moving on and learning more!!

B U R N That sensation you are feeling in your fingertips is progress. This is a big milestone for you! I'm proud of you. There is no going back now . . . no more putting up with some obnoxious guitar player who thinks he knows everything. Now the song will sound as you intended it. I think those chord changes sound darn good and the ukulele turns out to be an excellent accompaniment for your voice. *** For those who have not met Penelope, I'll just say she is a REAL LOOKER! Spruce top and block inlays just like my Gibson SG Custom ***

Besides a great voice you write really outstanding lyrics......congratulations on starting to learn the uke...sounds nice to hear you accompanying your self...what's next guitar? mandolin? piano?...

I know I keep saying this, but... you have a sweet voice. That's a cool story. But I think the first time I heard a song written about an instrument was Stephen L. Krell singing about one of his vintage electric. Yours however was far less noisy! ;) Good job, Colleen, and that's some nice poetry!

Colleen. I assume that you know of the Tadpole Angel… I think that you should take a shot at Doc's Concerto of the Great Southland!… I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'm talking about but, if not, send me an email

Oh this is nicey nice. Love yur vox.

Lovely voice

Thanks to all for such supportive feedback! You are just the best!!!!

Great voice, great song with outstanding lyrics Love it Colleen!!

Beautiful song Colleen! Great way to start the challenge.

You have a sweet voice.

I can relate.

*Another example where the whole is greater than the sum of it's parts* I think this live version is better than anything we could have ever cooked up in my basement no matter how much wine we drank. Thanks to Gene's help, this remix has a lot more definition. Bottom line, it's better when everyone comes together to contribute.

Thanks to Gene for his help! This new version sounds much better!!!!!

Hi Gene! Thanks for the offer. I sent you a separate message with my contact info. I'd appreciate it very much!

Thanks for the kind words Greg and the Proods! Fun to try something a little out of my normal mode of writing.

This is a great addition to the challenge. Lots of really cool things going on in this song. Love the bridge / chorus!!! Great vocals.

Came back for a second helping!!!

I love your vocal harmonies. These are great lyrics!! (I always wanted to be Madonna too! Desperately Seeking Susan hooked me for good). Great song you wonderful Proods!!! A total instant fav!

Wonderful story telling. Another great song! Thanks for posting this one even if it battled you!!

Oh Yeah!!!!!!!! I remember this one! That was a lot of fun. Great song John!

Raw and powerful! This speaks volumes in its simplicity... Sending healing thoughts and strength as this evokes someone battling an illness...

great way to start the morning! Get the FUNK OUT!!!

Now that's telling it like it is!!! Love this. Awesome!!

Hauntingly beautiful and sad. Evocative lyrics. Really pulls you in. Love the piano

Feeling some Elvis here! Nice!!!

This song just totally moved me. WOW!

Enjoying a dip into a playlist by you! Your music is just awesome! Thanks for my Sunday afternoon soundtrack.

This is awesome! I love the guitar riff. Perfect backdrop for your strong lyrics and heartfelt vocals. Another amazing addition to Who Knew!!

love the lyrics of this song! Really cool way your beautiful voice winds in and out. Great one!

This is really a cool song... some essence of Bowie coming to me. Your vocals are really haunting. In times where we're listening and giving accolades in this digital media, know that your music brings us all together! Although I will admit to a fantasy of bringing all us alone toners together live for the funnest jam session ever! Thanks for this great song!!! An instant fav

Came back for another listen. This one is really a fav!!!!

Somehow you guys make even creepy subject matter sound happy! Love the vibe on this. Who Knew that this challenge would bring out such different stories in every song's approach to the topic. Great one!

Love the songwriting challenge! Lots of fun!!!!! Thanks Greg!

"Ain't feelin' it!" What a great line! I love this one!