Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

Thanks Brett

very cool.

Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

Thanks fairynuff : )

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

nice..

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

I hear you, brother.

Thank you fairynuff!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Calm and relaxing, I like the emotional feel to it. Very nice.

Like this song. Great melody and sound.

Like the arrangement and guitar riffs. Catchy!

Cool song. Nice job!

Mellow and enjoyable. Sounds a bit like Steely Dan to me.

Thanks for your kind comments pharmakeus!

Nice and original sounding rock. Love guitar and vocals

Good and crazy!

Cool and mellow.

Very nice! You capture the emotion of this song and it comes across so well Tom.

Thanks castrati brothers : )

Like the sounds and arrangement. Nice one!

Cool. Great beat Jason!

Great song and performance Tom. Vocals good and enjoyed the two guitars : )

Yes, better that than the other way around! Thanks for listening Fudgetusk

Great riff, rocking me Billy.

Odd and quirky, kind of gets into your head. - the song too!

Unique and cool. SAHB comes to mind. Nice one Brett!

Upbeat and dancy tune. Positive feeling to it. Cool!

Catchy and punchy. Nice track! Not sure if I can stop bouncing around the room though.