I really like it a lot. I like your style.

"If only for a day..." - did that line actually work? Nice one!

Cool Tune.

Heartwarming track of lovely! Very cool guitar break too.

nice one man! Are you going to add more instruments to it? The lyrics are awesome. Great pickin..esp on the lead parts.

Nice one mate very cool.

very nice,,,

nice song,,,good story line,,, very nice playing

... And JS Tolar Muy FNG!

Muy FN Bien! JRR

good to hear from you! Thought you had vanished. How are things going for you? And..thanks for the comment! :)

--good to hear, man; thanks for listening!

Flies in My Lunchbox is out. You did an excellent job Mark. We did Baby Green Ernie justice with that tune. Uncle Ernie would be proud of us.

Interesting transition at the 1:30 mark. Good stuff. Nice recording and production as always!

This is kickass! ...laid back and heavy - like a lost track from God Ween Satan. Sweet groove and wicked cool vocals my mang!

re ur comment lol!! Well the keys I'm using ARE pretty old, I think they date back to the 80's. And I'd pay to see you dancing to it. ---------------------------------- If I still had my parachute pants with 40 zippers, I would probably try to break out to this! Radical and fanatical, with a soft landing!

Listening and laughing...you rock bro

This song always raises a smile man. fun stuff.

This song is amazing. I like your whole catalog here -- how long have you been writing and recording?

You may have been drunk but you are no loser. Love the lyrics.

I dig it, bro!

Excellent tale Dave! Top notch songwriting and wonderful playing & performance as usual!

Right on solid!! As real as it gets, very cool.

Mmmm! Delicious strings - Love it!

Oh, don't say that was the last of them. I love these gems on tape. Beautiful!

Ha, love it! This is exactly what Jerry Lee Lewis could be doing if he wasn't out chasing embryos!

I like your attitude! Very cool!

Beautiful tune, bro. Never forget...

A captivating, entertaining listen! Sweeeeeeeeeet!!!!! Love the lyrics.

I thought you did a great job with this, bro! Very cool, I'm impressed!

Wrenched up big time!!! Love it.

What's up bro!

Grade A Fancy! I really dig this one, bro!

Badass!! Feverish playing - I love it. This will suffer many, many listens from me - So glad it's a 320K mp3. Norm, you rocked it, too - Brilliant percussion that is not overdone and fits in perfectly!

I love that you take the time to entertain people who may not otherwise get the opportunity. And a fine performance too!

Oh, babycakes - The name of a huge tub of mini donuts at Sam's Club. Delicious but sadly they were discontinued. Quite industrial looking, so I'm not surprised.

This was cool. Not sure where it was going 'cause it's too short, but I like it!

I love this f*cking song!

Normy!!! He lives! Excellent melodic beat - Very tasty to the ears!

I hope it worked!