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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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misfit wine said

thanks glu. do i reply to comments here or at your page?? confusimicating.

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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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glu said

I couldn't say it better than ic42! Powerful metaphors abound in these volatile seas!

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I'm almost totally happy with this song except it is for the mix. I would appreciate any comments on how to improve it. Is too bassy and the mix has a big blip in the beginning where it gets louder for a second. I know I can fix some of that with…
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glu said

nice song, love the lyrics. Because you are asking for advice, I recommend bringing out the percussion to compliment that rich bass. I also think a little percussive variation would help the track move more fluidly. Looking forward to the final mix. Cheers!

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I'm almost totally happy with this song except it is for the mix. I would appreciate any comments on how to improve it. Is too bassy and the mix has a big blip in the beginning where it gets louder for a second. I know I can fix some of that with…
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glu said

nice track.. love the lyrics! Because you are looking for comments to improve your mix... you could also try the alonetone forum section "track therapy" -- it's a little sleepy but maybe more folks will start posting if more start using it. http://alonetone.com/forums/track-therapy I recommend doing something with the percussion to compliment that nice bass; drums sit too low in the mix- bring them out... and they could use some variation to keep the track moving/building. Nice song idea, I look forward to hearing the final mix. cheers!

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I'm almost totally happy with this song except it is for the mix. I would appreciate any comments on how to improve it. Is too bassy and the mix has a big blip in the beginning where it gets louder for a second. I know I can fix some of that with…
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misfit wine said

Hi Tim. Yeah, I've got a backload to upload but I want to clean them up. Decided to post this one even though the mix is off. Figured people like yourself would make some helpful comments....? I'll be checking out your latest later, myself.

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I'm almost totally happy with this song except it is for the mix. I would appreciate any comments on how to improve it. Is too bassy and the mix has a big blip in the beginning where it gets louder for a second. I know I can fix some of that with…
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tim mcfate said

you are back. i will listen more later. tim

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Had to reload this due to accidental deletion. This is the first song I made all by myself - words, vocals, bass, and highly FXed guitar- since I don't really play. The drum-track is by Boss BR-1180. The song is about someone in a crappy relationship…
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Guest said

Sounds pretty cool, you should check out my vocals: ksolo.myspace.com/executionereric

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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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Guest said

You are a gem. I wreck myself on this tune. - Mica

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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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ic42 said

many sirens are not female. i know many shipwrecks. it is sad. the song repeats the raw mistakes, a metaphorical rock to break up on over and over. it is well done music. it is hoped you find better seas. 0x0

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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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misfit wine said

You are my very next deck speck. It's true!

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You know when you're creating something and it comes out exactly how you wanted it, and then it becomes you favorite? This one is still my favorite and has not been dethroned yet. The song is all by me - words, vocals, bass, the "guitar…
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Drew said

i like the originality of it. the autopan makes me feel like i'm a speck on your deck headed for your next shipwreck

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