back in this cold house:- with video
Tharek Ali Mokbul
Had to do this one on the fly before an open mic night….
Sorry about the quality…
Came up with the song this morning ……
One take… GTR+MIC on one tracks (doubled up), Played live….
Not much time to record music or look at the site recently…….. :(
Back In This Cold House
Words and Music by Tharek Mokbul
Lyrics
See you ain’t strong for saying,
I was wrong for staying
Back in this cold house
I’m praying now….
Now the Flames are gone… (Repeat line…)
I hear this record play
and I can feel it fading
Back in this cold house
I’m Kneeling now
Fading All Along…. (Repeat Line….)
Your tears have dried and left a stain
Which shows your anger.
Back in this cold house
I see it now
I saw it all along… (Repeat line…)
We’ll meet in memories for now.
In dreams outstanding.
Back in this cold house
I’m sleeping now…
I’ll Lay until our dawn…. (Repeat line)
See you ain’t strong for saying, (And so on…)
Beautiful opening picking, Tharek! What a genuine voice... Talk about honest music. Wow. I have a feeling that your music will soon begin to influence mine in some pretty profound ways.
Another coffeehouse I wish I'd been at. I agree with Gary Essex about the size of this song. Wonderful - and I think the recording is beautiful. I feel like it gives me the room I need to listen.
Great take!! The song is bigger than itself...
Fantastic melody - just brilliant! Kudos!
Love this track, everything about it. Maybe the rawness you hear is the vulnerability I hear. If you re-do it, please don't destroy this version - it lives! Truly.
thanks guys. . . I thought i didn't do to well on this track. A bit too raw. . Thanks for the listens.
what a beaut. I'm going to have to download your tracks Tharek. You've got some great, great, great material.
Real FNG! I wish I could have your voice.
Muy excellente! (And playing with conviction and passion makes up for any lack of recording perfection, IMO.)
Well done. Great voice! The story itself is well told - almost tough to listen to. I hope the house warms back up!
Wow. Whatever you do with this song, however you might record it or produce it or refine it, I hope you always have this recording of your song - it's wonderful. I would have enjoyed being at that open house.
This is a fantastic song! Performance is also wonderful, but, oh my, amazing, top notch song-writing!
Good one.
This morning? oh boy, I wish I could do that. It's a great song.
Man, another killer tune, bro!! The upper register vox are very very nice! Sweet guitar playing as usual!
Such incredible feeling here, spooky really, its got the spook brother. It feels like the real deal.