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50/90 (50 songs in 90 days songwriting group)

by Jeff Gordon

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Please Forgive Me (acoustic gtr/vocal demo)

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July 6 - Used a prompt from another writing challege - the 5 in 5 Song Challenge, July 2020. I used 5 of the suggested words: Forgive, Wooden, Coast, Hands, Looking

Lyric:

VERSE:
The wooden figure in the corner quietly
Like an old friend seems to know me
Better than I know myself
Sees the sadness in my quiet anxiety
Look away I sense my sadness
Usually keep that on the shelf

PRE:
My hands are looking for a pen to write this down
‘Cause if I don’t, I’ll never turn this life around

CHORUS:
Please Forgive Me
Please Forgive Me
I know I hurt you
All those years ago
Please Forgive Me
Forgive me

VERSE:
Livin’ on the coast so far away from you
Away from the heartland
Where everything fell apart
I’m finally making an adjust in my view
Should’ve broken the silence sooner
Release the feelings from my heart

PRE:
Now I know what I need to say to you
I hope you’ll listen, ‘cause it’s what I gotta do

CHORUS:
Please Forgive Me
Please Forgive Me
I know I hurt you
All those years ago
Please Forgive Me
Forgive Me

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