The music is a Stephen Stills-style early '70s-flavor of that effective country/folk rock formulae of simple and sweet, allowing the lyrics and vocals to shine. And in this case your vocals do the lyrics serious justice, and those lyrics are moving, touching. They sucked me in, inviting me to visualize the setting and experience the emotions. This is a for-real good bit of songwriting. This was how it was done in our day, but the art seems lost on the under 30 generation.

We like this one!

Great job on the challenge - excellent!

This is awesome!!!!! $89.95~ not a bad deal at all!!!! Short or long hair... decided on blond cuz wouldn't you too!!! Love this!! I am picturing her sitting in your car... backseat driving

Bittersweet, with sad lyrics sung over beautiful piano. On the one hand I’m thinking, “That poor guy needs some company,” while on the other, selfish hand I’m thinking, “But out of his misery came this gorgeous music we might not otherwise have been blessed to experience.” And on my third, evil hand, I’m thinking, “What kind of awesome tune would he belt out if we increased his misery by roughing him up every now and then?”

An exceptional job -- great lyrics, pleasant music. You done good. The snore at the end -- ha ha! Sure glad you got in on this challenge, and, as Greg said, welcome to the party!

Pretty

Very early-Rolling Stones-ish. I can see Mic Jagger strutting about the stage in my mind as I listen to this. Dig!

Lots of fun . . . Welcome to the party!

evening friend, i have not been around to listen for a while,, like this.. nicely done mixing,, best of luck with rpm

aaaawwww, a lovely song, really nice acoustics, love your voice :-)

This is purely awesome !!!! I simply love it ! Really great guitarwork accompanied by brilliant vocals ! A+

lovely

I shall now go back to my broom cupboard... slightly chastened with thoughts of what can be achieved with spontaneity!

When I read "ad libber" I wasn't expecting, well, this... I'm stunned, quality. Both me and Mrs R love it.

Jammin'

I love this tune Regs. Spontaneously raw.

God almighty, I love that track.

i certainly do ...i was always amazed how you took the voice off the track...... a much better version than mine Thank you

I love the vocal effects man! The world would be a better place if everyone talked to each other in auto tune, all the time!

Enjoyed very catchy quite the ear worm

How did I miss this ....superb!! 10 out of 10 sir ...

Great to hear the pair of you again...such a relaxing vibe and an earworm to stay with me for the day ..... Bongo ca.........bongo cab...

Works for me 😁

Nice tribute

That’s one Great groove

A good old foot tapper and not naff at all

Sounds like you’ve been inside my youngest sons head. Seb would agree totally...... excellent delivery as always ...

All the time ....or I’d lose them ....well worth getting down

Another beauty from the shoebox.. keep em coming

i think it's time for a knap

Well you’ve proved to yourself your not “crap” reminds me of something my father would say to me time and time again “ don’t touch that you’ll break it “ and I normally did. Pleased you saved this one from the shoe box an excellent lyric love it pie pod bound along with all your others 😁

My mother recently died of Alzheimer’s after a long illness and I can say you’ve certainly captured the disease with this track, the desperate confusion, the fear and loss an excellent bit of work . My heart goes out to you or anyone who has to deal with Dementia it’s a horror You grieve while the loved one is still alive.

I’m a fan

Loving your style of music you play it well .....I shall be downloading ....it’s dog walk bound thank you

That’s some nice guitar.........

What a start.....loving that guitar. .......what if hey!

Ha! Ha! That’s some smooth guitar playing and those lyrics made me smile

Sounds like most of the evenings I have out or in .... liking the trippy vibe too

That’s a real energetic Edith at the beginning of the verse she certainly gets it ...loving it ....nice solo ....