The music is a Stephen Stills-style early '70s-flavor of that effective country/folk rock formulae of simple and sweet, allowing the lyrics and vocals to shine. And in this case your vocals do the lyrics serious justice, and those lyrics are moving, touching. They sucked me in, inviting me to visualize the setting and experience the emotions. This is a for-real good bit of songwriting. This was how it was done in our day, but the art seems lost on the under 30 generation.

We like this one!

Great job on the challenge - excellent!

This is awesome!!!!! $89.95~ not a bad deal at all!!!! Short or long hair... decided on blond cuz wouldn't you too!!! Love this!! I am picturing her sitting in your car... backseat driving

Bittersweet, with sad lyrics sung over beautiful piano. On the one hand I’m thinking, “That poor guy needs some company,” while on the other, selfish hand I’m thinking, “But out of his misery came this gorgeous music we might not otherwise have been blessed to experience.” And on my third, evil hand, I’m thinking, “What kind of awesome tune would he belt out if we increased his misery by roughing him up every now and then?”

An exceptional job -- great lyrics, pleasant music. You done good. The snore at the end -- ha ha! Sure glad you got in on this challenge, and, as Greg said, welcome to the party!

Pretty

Very early-Rolling Stones-ish. I can see Mic Jagger strutting about the stage in my mind as I listen to this. Dig!

Lots of fun . . . Welcome to the party!

evening friend, i have not been around to listen for a while,, like this.. nicely done mixing,, best of luck with rpm

aaaawwww, a lovely song, really nice acoustics, love your voice :-)

This is purely awesome !!!! I simply love it ! Really great guitarwork accompanied by brilliant vocals ! A+

lovely

I shall now go back to my broom cupboard... slightly chastened with thoughts of what can be achieved with spontaneity!

When I read "ad libber" I wasn't expecting, well, this... I'm stunned, quality. Both me and Mrs R love it.

Jammin'

I love this tune Regs. Spontaneously raw.

God almighty, I love that track.

i certainly do ...i was always amazed how you took the voice off the track...... a much better version than mine Thank you

I love the vocal effects man! The world would be a better place if everyone talked to each other in auto tune, all the time!

Wish I was there sounds quite the party

One of my favs too . Great job

The silence echos a thousand thoughts excellent track

Another from way back you two certainly brought me out of my shell

This one took me back

This has sure got some atmosphere

Love it !

On the money !

Loving that lead! It has it all a great 80’s synth ploughing away and a great vocal

Enjoyed !1

Got a Zappa/monkies flavor to my ear and that’s a great concoction up beat and happy love it

Another beautiful piece

my condolences its a lovely song has a ethereal feel to it

And what an excellent attempt it is too….Bravo

Beautifully played expected like the rising sun

Unless of course your life is out of control and the path spirals ending the center of the island after circling for the same answer again and again and never finding it

I agree with the hauntingly beautiful …….you must be a ghost

Loving that dirty tone

Love it

What can I say I m a fan!