smudged it with my foot, covered it up with leaves but came back to see what I believed. Love this line.

Great song Tim- I'm liking your stuff!!

great feel and love the vocal

You didn't hear back? Wow, sorry. That doesn't sound like me. :-( Loving your laid back style. Very cool music, Tim.

Cool song. Your tunes really remind me of the Stones.

Nice, very nice song!

Love the feel of this tune.

A heavy list for 28 days. Very enjoyable. I hope we see more from you in days to come.

thanks

Man this is incredible. The off kilter feeling of the music belies the deeply personal lyrics. Like being in a funhouse with a slanted floor, but someone is crying in the distance.

no this is brand new. actually a one take vocal. it does contain some of the same lirics as fertility dance. did you know that you can click on the about tap to get the lyrics?. nice to see you listening much appreciated tim

sad fun Doc

is this a sequel?maybe an update. Doc

This one is up there with some of your best work. Doc

Nice album Tim,hey where do I get one of those rockers with the roll down windows?Some interesting percussion sounds in this one.One of my favorites of the bunch. Doc

Great Tune!

T... 'twas good to hear from you. Surprising...your attention deposits bright little gems into the arms and hearts of the universe.. a beautiful rendition, thank you.

thanks it is always unexpected when a tune gains popularity. that song came together so quickly.it was truly inspired. that was a one take vocal. quit often i will harmonize with the main voice. but i knew soon after i recorded the first that that was enough i really appreciate your input and support tim

the river is now in my best of RPM09 itunes playlist! Incredible.

rob so nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting.

well i have a special spot in my heart for arizona. i also have headphones that fade in and out at times so your mix is messing with my head. i realize it is you and not me. i see the heat has effected you as well. the horns work well. the choral thing at the end is sweet thanks tim

refferences to paint colors is always good with me. an expensive color. building with drums. druggy words. nice mix tim

i think you have a good handle on a tight little project. you shoould publish your words under the "about"tab. i like the change up at 1:30 tim

gypsies in the night around a fire. you show upload your words and put them under the "about" tab. i am not always sure what you are saying. i like to know what people are saying. call me paranoid!!!! funny little organ in the background wonderful job tim

the room sound on this is very cool. reall live feel. all the parts work great together. the progression is exciting, want to hear more. tim

this is my first year in the rpm challenge as well. you are right it was a lot of fun. i miss it. February went by so fast. this one is pretty dynamic. great bass sound. i find the scream sounds during the rappy chorus pretty interesting. cool guitar at the end tim

you have a great melody here and the bass is so clear. good clean recording. what do you use to record? here come the drums! tim

i love the change at 1:32. i think you should upload your words and put them under the "about" tab" nice job.

yes , you have the funk going on this album!!!!!!!

it is the horns , isnt it? very radio friendly good job tim

big sound, tight and tricky with bright hooks

hopefull tune. this whole album is a great self reflected blessing good work tim

i like the feel of this . the chorus is really sweet. good story

this works really well. i can easily see myself ......walking! birds on that wire. i like the way you have chosen to arrange it with the subtle builds tim

yes it is, yes,no, holy crap, thank you glubotic. quite clever glu tim

great groove.

great mix . you should publish your words under the "about" tab. it would be so good to read along. it really is important and you will get more folks to liaten.....really this is a really good song i am digging your metafore tim

i like the rambling feel tim

i like the whistle. and the hope tim

nice intro,, greta sounding drums,,cool break @1:05,, february darkness and pain. and it must be even darker where you live tim