smudged it with my foot, covered it up with leaves but came back to see what I believed. Love this line.

Great song Tim- I'm liking your stuff!!

great feel and love the vocal

You didn't hear back? Wow, sorry. That doesn't sound like me. :-( Loving your laid back style. Very cool music, Tim.

Cool song. Your tunes really remind me of the Stones.

Nice, very nice song!

Love the feel of this tune.

A heavy list for 28 days. Very enjoyable. I hope we see more from you in days to come.

thanks

Man this is incredible. The off kilter feeling of the music belies the deeply personal lyrics. Like being in a funhouse with a slanted floor, but someone is crying in the distance.

no this is brand new. actually a one take vocal. it does contain some of the same lirics as fertility dance. did you know that you can click on the about tap to get the lyrics?. nice to see you listening much appreciated tim

sad fun Doc

is this a sequel?maybe an update. Doc

This one is up there with some of your best work. Doc

Nice album Tim,hey where do I get one of those rockers with the roll down windows?Some interesting percussion sounds in this one.One of my favorites of the bunch. Doc

Great Tune!

T... 'twas good to hear from you. Surprising...your attention deposits bright little gems into the arms and hearts of the universe.. a beautiful rendition, thank you.

thanks it is always unexpected when a tune gains popularity. that song came together so quickly.it was truly inspired. that was a one take vocal. quit often i will harmonize with the main voice. but i knew soon after i recorded the first that that was enough i really appreciate your input and support tim

the river is now in my best of RPM09 itunes playlist! Incredible.

rob so nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting.

you should publish your words under the "about" tab. i would love to read along. i think you and i have simular sensabilities. i like your work tim

very nice . each song makes me want to hear the next. very thoughtfull. good mixes. the album holds up well as a collection of songs. tim

yes i can see it. this is perfect for the first nice day of spring here on the east coast. thank you tim

i like where this takes me and i would love to know what you are using to generate the sound scape. i need to get some software with the kinds of controls that generate these tones tim

reminds me of the "the weakerthans". i really like the guitar tones . seeing how you can make changes, i would love to see and have been advocating for, a tab for lyrics. it can be a much richer experience if you can read along and not miss the music because you are straining to understand the story or message. i have been putting my words under the "ABOUT " tab but it isnt obvious to the listener. love your style and voice. tim

really sweet. "now i remember" kind of feel.

i like this side of you. a great idea for the challenge. my first child was born in 1976. we lived in a house truck on the beach in ventura california. sounds as though you were near the water as well, 3000 miles away tim

really nice very energgetic arrangment. makes me think of tiny fish swimming in shallow water, sort of franticly tim

really well articulated vocals and pristene playing

you should publish your lyrics right after your discription under the "about"tab very soulfull stuff you have tim

i really find you voice interesting. i think your falseto is both funny and baeutfull. nice simple piano playing nice job tim

finally someone else who publishes ther words. thank you so much . other artist dont seem to understand what a difference in the listening experience that can make. i am emjoying your playing and i think you have some very tight arrangments i will keep listening tim

quite sexy in a strange way.

i like your poetry. and the positioning of melody with arrangment.

the picking and sings are really refreshing and some of the changes you throw in are very clever.

i think i hear the field!!

really sweet. and sad. been there. strikes a note in my heart. you have a gift with observation and memories. i am hoping that these are reall experiences because you shouldnt be able to make this up. it just would not be fare, sort of tim

a simple but important fact of life tim

i think there is a story here! tim

great effort for a first album. i like your words. pretty intence experience this rpm thing tim