This has a lovely relaxed feel to the music (reminiscent of the soundtrack to Moon?). I like the clean feel for the chorus in the first two iterations but I'd add the sha-la-las in for the play out to give some differentiation.
As Kavin says, I think it needs something around the 2:40 mark. Maybe something instrumental and a bit soaring.
-M
(Comment cross-posted to the other version!)
Although I think I like this version the best, a longer break in the middle (at 2:40 there is a short one) with some ambient shalalas would be cool, just to break it up a bit. Just my op., the song and production are great as is.
This version sounds more polished....
Tighter for some reason...
Not sure why....
Seems clearer....
Still Love it though....
I'm with Geas...
You Two need Some exposure and recognition!!
Love like a salt river washing away
Love's like sunshine evaporate
Love like floating candles blowing away
Watch out for the way you'll compensate
When I've seen all you have to give
When I'm still hungry
I need more than this
Tell me how…
Love like a salt river washing away
Love's like sunshine evaporate
Love like floating candles blowing away
Watch out for the way you'll compensate
When I've seen all you have to give
When I'm still hungry
I need more than this
Tell me how…
The chorus is adapted from "O Death Rock Me Asleep", by Anne Boleyn, while imprisoned in the Tower of London, waiting for her execution.
(Tolar & Savigear 2010)
Product of noodling around. Lead guitars are a combo of UAD's Nigel plugin and the Fractal Axe Fx. Clean guitars are the Fractal. The outro guitars are my Princeton Recording amp.
I played the piano's through my midi guitar and Axon. You can…
Inspired by the french movie titled "The Element Of Crime." This is basically a night in the studio for some musical therapy via studio jam with myself.
I had a couple of hours to day to play around while the wife took the children into town for their new school shoes which signified the end of summer to me . So of course i went down the cellar and got Reg,Bob and the gang to help me write a song…
This is a composition for Jazz Quartet – Tenor Sax (sorry for the unrealistic stray notes), fretless bass, piano, and drums. All but the drums were preformed on my Fender Mustang + GR-20 retuned on the fly by Fractal Tune Smithy.
The tuning…
Hope the hurricane passes swiftly and without too much trouble.
Digging the groove you've got going here for the first couple of minutes and then the explosion into fierce guitar - great track!
Comments on Visions of Nell's stuff
Might be that the vocals sound a bit clearer in this version, but damn- they're both great!
This has a lovely relaxed feel to the music (reminiscent of the soundtrack to Moon?). I like the clean feel for the chorus in the first two iterations but I'd add the sha-la-las in for the play out to give some differentiation. As Kavin says, I think it needs something around the 2:40 mark. Maybe something instrumental and a bit soaring. -M (Comment cross-posted to the other version!)
Although I think I like this version the best, a longer break in the middle (at 2:40 there is a short one) with some ambient shalalas would be cool, just to break it up a bit. Just my op., the song and production are great as is.
They are both great Keep them both. Nice job.
This version sounds more polished.... Tighter for some reason... Not sure why.... Seems clearer.... Still Love it though.... I'm with Geas... You Two need Some exposure and recognition!!
Very nice
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Yeah!
How about we just keep both and have the sha-la-la as a bonus track?
Sha la la! :-)
Sha-la-la, I'm singing Sha-la-la. So there, ha,ha,ha!! You two deserve world recognition.
This is such a pretty song. Love it!
love it!
first!!!!
Another good one guys! Love it. Keep up the good work.
There is a real depth to this song. That chorus just takes it over the top. I really, really like this song. Lots of great dynamics.
Any new stuff in the works? Give us some more.
Proper job.
Incredible lyrics, really. This one sweeps me away. OMG beautiful song here folks.
00ooOO0O00))oo -yeah!
So nice. 'love the opening. : )
Comments made by Visions of Nell
Another solid rock track - crunchy riffage!
Woah! Yeah! Rocked my sox off! Welcome to Alonetone! -Tess
Liking this mellow groove - especially the fingerpicking during the lighter parts. -Tess (Sister Savage)
Glad you're all safe. Digging these bluesy tones. -Tess
Nice one Dave, sounds totally authentic! Fabulous vocals! - Tess
Super Bethan and Super Brian! - Tess
Big bad sounds - love it! Crunchy and solid as usual, DD! -Tess S
Awesome ragga vox over a solid groove - very cool. -Tess S
Frisky jazz! -Tess S
Hope the hurricane passes swiftly and without too much trouble. Digging the groove you've got going here for the first couple of minutes and then the explosion into fierce guitar - great track!