Powerful lyrics, man. Something all of humanity should be able to relate to; Buddhist, Christians, atheists, whatever their philosophy and beliefs be about a hereafter. So we're all guilty of silly thoughts sometimes. I'm glad you had the courage to express it in music and poetry for the rest of us.

Great lyrics! I know that Rita girl!! "it matterszzzzzzzzzz" beep beep! Love that

FUCKING BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bravo! erratic and lovely.

I believe half of the drivers in the world have been caught in traffic behind Rita and can relate and appreciate this song. The other half of drivers are Rita! I enjoyed this. Rock on!

aaaaaah...oooooou.ouuuuuuuu....Love it!!

my three year old thinks he hears himself. congrats on the fun. cant wait to hear more!

I enjoyed it -- elements of this mix down reminded me of playing Revolution #9 backwards back in the day. Mad mastering skills -- Rock on!

;) Sweet, cute, adorable. <3

Love Gary on this!! Bloody incredible

good stuff!

YES! Great job! A really groovy, fascinating piece. Rock on!

I'm into it!

Brilliant. Great music and awesome lyrics. You're very gifted, very talented. Love the vocals and the mix down/mastering job in particular. You ROCK -- Rock on!

Love the music, the vocals, and especially the lyrics -- Rock on!

Great message.... Great Song.

Cheeky and fabulous.

Talking heads in another dimension, I dig dig dig!!! So crazy I cant help but love it!

Pretty imaginative. I like.

sometimes i wonder and dont want to know. we are all dying. today the oldest we have ever been and the youngest we will ever be again... haunting song my friend. the music is wonderful. vocals are sweet. more! more! more!

perfect accompaniment to my relaxing sunday morning bathtime.. cheers!

very dreamy.. conjures a nice image

What a great idea this is.. the melody and the delivery of it contrast perfectly to create something unique. chipper

charming.. very..

nothing valuable to offer critique wise i'm afraid, other than to say that as usual this was thoroughly enjoyed.

reminds me of something.. think it might be corpses in their mouths by ian brown.. but only in a mild way.. great feel.. very delicate

great playing chappy.. lovely stuff

This is brilliant. I need to give this album a proper listen once I've wrapped up the challenge (nearly there!) - in fact I need to listen to loads of the finished articles.. anyone know if there will be a big page of them like last year... Su?!

love hearing harmonica in something this dark and heavy.. brilliant. great sound on the riff too. nice one chappy!

this is class! reminds me of some of the kinks stuff.. perfick

this is brilliant. great sound to it (especially the vocals). and the lyrics are class

wouldnt have thought that would work.. mario on his keyboard and luigi playin mad ass drums.. it does though, infectious, and its going to be playin in my head when i try and sleep tonight.. thanks for that ;)

wow.. that was incredible.

here's the first Gary!! Thanks again so much for all the help...

i like rhythm track A, I like rhythm track B, but which is better? There's only one way to find out.. fight!!

really enjoyed this. quite a journey.. glad i had my headphones on for it or else i might have missed bits. Bass is so fat too, great sound..

oh my god.. amazing guitars!

love the harmonica on this one..

im living this song at the momment! great track.. reminds me of what i like about shel silverstein/dr. hook. Also shades of Nilsson when he was feeling jovial.. I love that stuff! Loving the crazy middle section too.. Thanks for the comments by the way.. much appreciated!

absolutely no hesitation is saying it all works. lyrics, mix, the lot. cracking stuff this. really really like this.