I like it more than Johnny Cash version of Depeche Mode song. I know your song only shares name and i actually expected this to be a cover. I'm curious, which software do you use for recording?
Love this sunny day doo,doo,doo,doo song.You have a great voice.Love the melody.And who are you walking with on this beach? Hmmm?? NH coastline perhaps??
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
I like it - are you performing it live or is this not mastered? Using an online mastering service shouldn't be too expensive to improve the quality - it's a great song, it's hard to hear it, though.
Hey - thanks for your comments on my tracks. Really enjoyed your whole record but thought I'd leave my comment here. It suits your style so well and, like you say, gotta love those train songs
Is this about a real place in your life. Very nice (You can answer by putting a message on any of my songs.) Thank you for listening to my songs and commenting.
a twist in the tale....
My sister Mary calls on me
Very rare she comes around
She tells me she is in love with this guy
Who lives on the other side of town
Wide eyed, loud and gushing
She tells me his name is Danny McCrew
Over coffee…
my music composition, a strict 12 tone row work for electronic string orchestra.The photo is from “Pexels” :
https://www.pexels.com/search/autumn%20background/
Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
Some blues/boogie fun.
Ain’t no fun
It's a well known fact
When you’re with the wrong woman
And caught in the act
Sworn to secrecy
We even made a pact
But didn’t matter
We were caught in the act
Been watched and followed
Traced…
The Woman You Love
She never needs to compromise
Strips paint with a simple cut of her eyes
As warm as a summer sun; as cold as a winter moon
Likes to relax with a book on a rainy afternoon
She lays tables cooks our food
Laughs a deeper…
Engine stalling
Redwood falling
Babies bawling
Sheriff come calling
Another child missing
Black snake hissing
Radio squawking
Searchers walking
Media stalking
Everybody talking
Mother in ruins
What’s black snake doing?
Fox in the…
Trucks pass by my house all night
Across the river east and west
I hike for several hours a day
And climb upon the granite crest
Where I can see the valley floor
And forest with its secret streams
The gold mined towns that lie below…
Under the glow where the night hums light
We gather close like moths in flight
A feast of stars on silver plates
Time melts fast yet it always waits
Candles sway with the wind's soft tune
Dancing shadows flirt with the moon
Sip the…
On the last day of summer
The day before school
It started in the water
Everything was cool
Until we saw this thing appear
It didn't have a sound
This darkness in the water
Looked like a shroud
First
I thought
“I’m trippin’”
There…
Reg was strumming and has got to thinking, I know he shouldn't but he has and he thinks the governments of this world have given up on love and understanding. They now want us to hate, hate, hate, hate, be angry, put against one another the haves…
Comments on acoustic57's stuff
that guitar has character. I like the live feel.
Great groove, brilliant instrumentation. I'd be interested -- two tracks? Guitar and mandolin? Sounds great!
Nice. A little glimpse into the comings and goings around the house!
I'm digging the poignancy here. Such a beautiful mournful vocal.
I like it more than Johnny Cash version of Depeche Mode song. I know your song only shares name and i actually expected this to be a cover. I'm curious, which software do you use for recording?
A laborious task but you’ve made it sound fun with the girl of your best friend
I know where you are coming from...
...like the intensity and the imagery.
Deep.Very thoughtful.
Love this sunny day doo,doo,doo,doo song.You have a great voice.Love the melody.And who are you walking with on this beach? Hmmm?? NH coastline perhaps??
Happy traveling song.I love the melody.Great Marlboro Man voice.Crank up volume.A bit hard to hear.
sounds good ! Its about your Voice. Commin through directly.
Hey Lane, No issues here. I'm glad to know people are listening and having fun. Thanks much for your help and interest. As yo can tell, I'm not very good at the mixing stuff. Thanks again, DaveC. ( acoustic57) :)
I like it - are you performing it live or is this not mastered? Using an online mastering service shouldn't be too expensive to improve the quality - it's a great song, it's hard to hear it, though.
Hi Dave! I like the groove on this one! Your guitar has nice tone.
Great song. I appreciate the message. "scarred the land, charred our soul"
Hey - thanks for your comments on my tracks. Really enjoyed your whole record but thought I'd leave my comment here. It suits your style so well and, like you say, gotta love those train songs
Is this about a real place in your life. Very nice (You can answer by putting a message on any of my songs.) Thank you for listening to my songs and commenting.
Comments made by acoustic57
Wow !!!!! Not only nicely done with the subtle background instruments, but also a definite "twist in the tail". Another great job :-)
Cool. Simple but nice. I like it.
Ooo-cool vocals! Nice 70's feel. A natural feel as well. Great job. :-}
Nice classical style. Once again, nice job :-)
Interesting. Has a haunt to it. Good job.
Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
Nice !!!!!! Loving these lyrics :-). Kickin' ass there bud. :-}
Geez Ray, your vocals do fit your songs. Nice work! Freakin' good, man. :-)
oh yeah, likin' this.... yeah :-)
Geez guys, more great vocals and music. You got it down !
I hear a little Nora Jones in this. Again, nice and clean, great vocals, good balance with the music. Keep 'em coming :-}
Hey, nice clean sound. Cool song. Liking the vocals. Great job !
hmm, mystery in the woods type of thing. cool how you let the song be itself.
Kind of hints at something in a soundtrack. Nice work.
nice :0}
ahh, has that 60s-70s folk rebellion vibe. Slammin' tune!
Nice. Completely different from my stuff. I like this :-)
Saw your discord comments during the listening party. Figured I check you out. Completely different han what I do. I like it !
Cool !
Cool old style rock vibe.