Sounds really cool the way it is mate. Great to here you back mate. Great track top vocals.

"thoughts have their consequences"... scary but true! stimulating poetry with groovy, beautiful sounds...

Love the diversity of your sounds!

martian blues... we've all been there... Nice track!

ooooo :3 this one is nothing but wicked :3

Sick :D I love it <3 keep it up!

how did I miss this one, love that rhythm, synthy feedback possibly ocean harp sound and the softly subliminal vocals.

Cool, thanks.

Cool and atmospheric. :)

Stunning and what a voice. Great.

Nice one mate. Very cool

> Wrinkled Shirt said > What are you using for percussion? As far as I recall, that was simply a stock rhythm track from an old Alesis drum machine. I was applying some effects in real time during the mix, bringing the level up & down which gives it that cool swirly dynamic... Thanks for listening!

Still Love it excellent vocal

nice smooth track - love the chilled vibe. Its all about the Neolithic Revolution!

Holy crap...I emailed you back, totally blew me away! I freakin love it. Can't even explain how well your voice fit with that riff. Wow...

@rinyville - Thanks for the response! I tend to want to bury my vocals in the mix... I resisted the urge this time, but when I listen back, it just seems too loud. I am really curious if anyone agrees that it could stand to be brought down just a touch?

love it

No, I don't think the vocal is too loud. Great song. Loved the whispering part too!

Nice one Michael top vocals mate very cool indeed.

To all who commented, thanks for listening! I do think the vocal is *just a bit* too loud... anyone agree with that assessment? @Mr Sandbags - I did actually smoke Marlboros once upon a time, but that was over twenty years ago! No more tobacco for me!

willi, this so is sick that I unfaved just so I could fave it again. yeah

yes

like Regs said, second & third faved!

Nick, this is most excellent... I want to try to tell you how much this moves me, but I'm truly at a loss for words... the space after that first chorus is just achingly beautiful, and yet you carry it on to a wonderful finish.. well done, sir.

this is a heavy tune Nick, you really build the feeling right up till the end....

for some reason this reminds me of my trip to Amsterdam.... breakfast at Barney's in particular

cool track... was it created entirely with the phone, or just using the phone as the recording device? either way, nice work

dig that auto wah

Most excellent. Love this mellow groove!

I hear a lot of very interesting ideas in this tune -- not to mention a ton of youthful excitement! Which is actually very much appreciated by an aspiring "old fart" such as me self... With some minor refinement, I think you could record a truly excellent version of this song! Please keep writing, recording, sharing, growing, and learning with all of us here in this amazing musical community! Also, if you have the means, I suggest getting into some virtual collaborations. It's one of the things we do best here at alonetone! :-D peace, Michael

Wow! Incredibly great start to the second half of this album! My favorite track so far, and that's really saying something - all these tracks are rock solid excellent!

Love the arrangement & the layers in this tune. I wouldn't call it driving, but it's beyond upbeat! Very uplifting track, musically whatever you want to call it! :-) I sure would appreciate it if you would post the words to all these tracks!! Help out my old ears here, wouldja??

Great ending to a great album. Total *WIN* for you guys... agree w/ MTC & am/fm -- a great variety of styles & vocals, job well done for sure.

acoustic guitar & swampy mix reminds me of an old old Beck album... the electric guitar sounds slowed down... another way cool track, for sure.

*excellent track* Vocals remind of the dude from Accept (I think -- is that the 'Balls to the Wall' band?) and I dig the heavy Sabbath influence.... you guys really got a great band going here with all the various influences you bring to the table

I love how different sounding your tunes are from one another. Cool Lou Reed-ish vox... There's also a Ric Ocasek (sp?) quality in there that I like

This as kick ass as an old B.O.C. or original Alice Cooper Band tune. That's pretty bad ass company. And I must say that was a tasteful & amusing bit of self-censorship with that well placed guitar bite. Tough track, for sure.

yeah, just a great vibe, great vocals, dig the laugh at the end... :-)

Thirty seconds in & I love the funky loose (kind half-drunk) vibe of this... woah, so familiar yet not derivative feeling... love these changes! Excellent vocals!

Dig that fuzzy guitar tone! I wanna write some rockers like this, but am really lacking in the rocking drum kit dept. Gonna have to see what I can do about that. Everything tightens up very nicely by that second guitar solo around three minutes in.... and the fuzz gets even fuzzier! *Nice*