Great job! Who's up for the Android challenge next?

What goes on in that mind of yours? Suspicious from now on and laughing out loud.

Oh what groovy, appropriate music! Great lyrics. Delightful vocals. What a wonderful job, and a story told so well, so fully, so... so... futuristic? Is that the word I'm looking for? I'm blown away! Thank you, Colleen!

Very creative :)

Nice lyrics!

Thanks so much everyone for your continued kind feedback and support. Meeting you all has been such a boon for me!!!! I am excited to keep moving on and learning more!!

B U R N That sensation you are feeling in your fingertips is progress. This is a big milestone for you! I'm proud of you. There is no going back now . . . no more putting up with some obnoxious guitar player who thinks he knows everything. Now the song will sound as you intended it. I think those chord changes sound darn good and the ukulele turns out to be an excellent accompaniment for your voice. *** For those who have not met Penelope, I'll just say she is a REAL LOOKER! Spruce top and block inlays just like my Gibson SG Custom ***

Besides a great voice you write really outstanding lyrics......congratulations on starting to learn the uke...sounds nice to hear you accompanying your self...what's next guitar? mandolin? piano?...

I know I keep saying this, but... you have a sweet voice. That's a cool story. But I think the first time I heard a song written about an instrument was Stephen L. Krell singing about one of his vintage electric. Yours however was far less noisy! ;) Good job, Colleen, and that's some nice poetry!

Colleen. I assume that you know of the Tadpole Angel… I think that you should take a shot at Doc's Concerto of the Great Southland!… I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'm talking about but, if not, send me an email

Oh this is nicey nice. Love yur vox.

Lovely voice

Thanks to all for such supportive feedback! You are just the best!!!!

Great voice, great song with outstanding lyrics Love it Colleen!!

Beautiful song Colleen! Great way to start the challenge.

You have a sweet voice.

I can relate.

*Another example where the whole is greater than the sum of it's parts* I think this live version is better than anything we could have ever cooked up in my basement no matter how much wine we drank. Thanks to Gene's help, this remix has a lot more definition. Bottom line, it's better when everyone comes together to contribute.

Thanks to Gene for his help! This new version sounds much better!!!!!

Hi Gene! Thanks for the offer. I sent you a separate message with my contact info. I'd appreciate it very much!

RIP to the amazing and enduring Mr. Lewis indeed..

This is fabulous! What a talented lad you were.... the gal in the story didn’t get it!

Good vibes

Perfect!!!!!! This captures our collective experience completely!!!

So love your voice and love these lyrics.... hope went and killed the snake. Love it

I agree with Ron... you’ve caught that Lighfoot spirit. An ode to the great Gitche Gami. So beautiful. An instant fav - legit

Love all the cool accoutrements of jingles and springles on this sultry magic carpet ride to Jazzy land!

Heroic ballads... this is so cool. So glad you’ve shared these older works. Brilliant!

Perfect for a cool morning cup of tea!

Wow... your vocals on this are just perfect. I hear that Jethro Tull influence there. Really pretty guitar playing.

ahhhhh families!!!!!!!!!!! I love this song!!!!!

Hey!!!! This turned out really nice! Love it.... perfect for our hot summer day today!

yup.... I say it's true! Lovely song... and just made me want to go crack open a bottle!

Gorgeous

What a fabulous story!!! I’ve seen that car!!!!

That’ll tell ‘em indeed. Great song!!

What a sweet sad song.... great lyrics!

Now this happy song just makes me want to hit the dance floor and sing along with you. Great song!

Crazy cool

Ahhhhhh! The great outdoors....