Great job! Who's up for the Android challenge next?

What goes on in that mind of yours? Suspicious from now on and laughing out loud.

Oh what groovy, appropriate music! Great lyrics. Delightful vocals. What a wonderful job, and a story told so well, so fully, so... so... futuristic? Is that the word I'm looking for? I'm blown away! Thank you, Colleen!

Very creative :)

Nice lyrics!

Thanks so much everyone for your continued kind feedback and support. Meeting you all has been such a boon for me!!!! I am excited to keep moving on and learning more!!

B U R N That sensation you are feeling in your fingertips is progress. This is a big milestone for you! I'm proud of you. There is no going back now . . . no more putting up with some obnoxious guitar player who thinks he knows everything. Now the song will sound as you intended it. I think those chord changes sound darn good and the ukulele turns out to be an excellent accompaniment for your voice. *** For those who have not met Penelope, I'll just say she is a REAL LOOKER! Spruce top and block inlays just like my Gibson SG Custom ***

Besides a great voice you write really outstanding lyrics......congratulations on starting to learn the uke...sounds nice to hear you accompanying your self...what's next guitar? mandolin? piano?...

I know I keep saying this, but... you have a sweet voice. That's a cool story. But I think the first time I heard a song written about an instrument was Stephen L. Krell singing about one of his vintage electric. Yours however was far less noisy! ;) Good job, Colleen, and that's some nice poetry!

Colleen. I assume that you know of the Tadpole Angel… I think that you should take a shot at Doc's Concerto of the Great Southland!… I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'm talking about but, if not, send me an email

Oh this is nicey nice. Love yur vox.

Lovely voice

Thanks to all for such supportive feedback! You are just the best!!!!

Great voice, great song with outstanding lyrics Love it Colleen!!

Beautiful song Colleen! Great way to start the challenge.

You have a sweet voice.

I can relate.

*Another example where the whole is greater than the sum of it's parts* I think this live version is better than anything we could have ever cooked up in my basement no matter how much wine we drank. Thanks to Gene's help, this remix has a lot more definition. Bottom line, it's better when everyone comes together to contribute.

Thanks to Gene for his help! This new version sounds much better!!!!!

Hi Gene! Thanks for the offer. I sent you a separate message with my contact info. I'd appreciate it very much!

Thanks so much Gene! I really appreciate the supportive feedback.

Thanks Andrew! Much appreciated!

awesome cover!!! One of my favorite songs. Beautiful harmony

Hi Andrews! Pleased to meet you here on this wonderful site, and thanks for the kind words on my tracks earlier this week. I really like this song! A great story, and so richly delivered. I look forward to listening to more of your music!

a really good grove

This is a pretty one! Is that you on the banjo and recorder too? Can't wait to see flowers just like you sing about.

Love this song! Thanks Greg!!

I really liked this song! Thanks for sharing. Great lyrics!

How sweet is that?!!!!

Beautiful!!

Cool lyrics! Kind of haunting... Thanks for sharing!!

This is a great song! Creates a great visual with the lyrics.

Really lovely!

Thanks everyone for the positive support! This is a great forum, and a fun way to spend time with like minded people on a -2 degree day here in MN

Rockin' good!!!!!!

Loved this!

Thanks everyone for your feedback!!!

Really beautiful! I could listen to this piece all day. Gets you right in the heart. Thanks for sharing

Thanks Gene for the kind words!!! Great to meet you here, and I wish you the best here during this challenging time. Music can sooth a weary body, that's sure.

Hi Ron! Thanks for listening. I'd be honored to get your mandolin on it. !