Interesting sound of drum and vocal. It’s a real toe tapper.

I've enjoyed listening to some tunes tonight and this one is right in my ball-park! Wonderful groove and vocal. And it highlights something i kept noticing. You write or craft wonderful bridge parts, whether they are vocal or not they give that magical lift to a tune. If I find a nice bridge for a tune this year it's down to you!

Good stuff. Such a cheery soundscape!

I love the vocal layering, I want to say its "haunting", but that's not the word. Enigmatic perhaps? I don't know, something resonates with me... resonant? Am I having writers block in a comment?

this is tight.

Always love the idea of vocals used as part of the rhythm. An age-old method used perfectly here.

Now that hit the spot , great track ....

loving what i've heard from you so far ..I shall have to delve deeper when I have time

Nice tap along beat...sounds haunting. I like it.

Nice jazz feel here. I like it all. Good job especially for a rough take. :-)

Oh yeah!! .. Jazzy!!

Cool set of Raw Songs !!

A Good Mess I'll Say!!

I like the acoustic space of the track. Listening through headphones, it feels like the band is surrounding you as they play.

Jazz-ma-tazz-tic

Congratulations on your RPM! .. Music Sounds Great!

Nice!!!

I love the sound of this! Well done all around.

Excellent atmosphere on this track

I agree with the Thom Yorke reference… really enjoy how this is put together …

That guitar opening caught my attention right away. I love the harmonies too...beautiful. Well done Dweeb. btw...I'm so impressed with your longstanding RPM participation (very inspiring...thank you). Of course, I would always like to hear more (but you have already given so much). Enjoy a good rest (creative work can take it out of us). Ohh....nice ending on this song too......!!!

Well titled....I enjoy the mystery and the darkness in this.

Wow...Been checking out more of your work. This is gorgeous!!!!! Love this.

oh yes! This is awesome and professional. Wow. Vocals great & catchy electric guitar riffs...it's got all the goods. Your collaboration is producing some great music! Looking forward to hearing the whole album when it's done. (ps. thanks for the listens and the fun feedback)

those lyrics! Great melody (and the title really captured my attention). Lovely guitar progression. I get a Neil Young vibe here (in the best way).

very cool song. Love those lyrics and a great groove. I also like the way it ends. Great to hear you again!

Beautiful! This really captures so much of my experience (my favourite time for walking). This is a very well composed piece and the playing and singing are amazing. Thank you

Yes! Very cool.

This is great. Great juxtaposition of string and beats!

beautiful mystical feeling there. Love this. Great to hear a fellow RPMer!

oh wow....this song speaks to me! What a great tune....beautiful guitar solo in there too. Thanks and congrats on your RPM :)

Those are great lyrics! Well done (I also appreciate that Byron quote)....thank you :)

oh wow...what a gorgeous song!!! That guitar is so peaceful and played with sensitivity. Truly beautiful. Thank you :)

you made lemonade! Well done :)

so peaceful....beautiful.

Wow...this is gorgeous!!! Those lyrics are powerful (I have chills). That challenge really produced!

Cool! Great different sections too, gives it complexity.

Very intense and meditative at the same time. Great!

that is great....yup depressing, true, ....but you made music!

Hey that is awesome (and hilarious too)! Great groove and love the lyrics!! (Fellow RPMer)