Thanks for the kind words folks, much appreciated :)

I think you nailed the breakdown, love when it comes back in. Great tune.

Aggressive.

This interesting and very clever. Most enjoyable!

Great job on this one! Keep it up. :)

See what happens when you start clowning around :D This is really something. I have to listen again.

nice! I like how this one turned out!

Yes- I think you hit the proverbial nail on the freakin' head with this one. Love the beat and that crunchy bass

I do love dancy rhythm. It does it for me!

yeay! love it! you are quite the sound sculptor, amigo.

Digging the glitchy bits and the synths!

what is the bpm for Mr. Palmer?

Took a few hours to make. For example a lot of fades are hand drawn automation and the whole thing is 540 bars long so that took a while even though I can copy & paste automation data in Logic. The 05:00 mark I went a bit mad with the filter resonance. I have a version where I clean that up a little and it sounds better I think. I might replace the online version.

So how long did this take DAMN - an alarm went off just as I started typing LOL - 5 minutes in! So as i was about to say - this is intriguing and the fade-ins/outs and those watery textures make it fun. It's a long way off my beaten track but still in my jungle ... it's getting to the stage now where I'll have to pick up a guitar ...

I'd like to build a song around Mr. Palmer.

love the rhythmic malfunctions. inspiring.

! Um...I can't believe you put a massive disclaimer on this! Incredibly well played, Sandbags!

I don't have a lot of time this morning but it's definitely time for you to stop being so modest. This totally deserves a more pretentious description. How about (in a deep announcer voice): a post-modern sonic exploration of the contemporary kick drum. :-)

Well you know on further listening I do find things to like in this. I'm inclined to give the process another go (maybe with a slightly shorter time frame) and think more about structure. Thanks again for your comments folks.

This will maybe sound crazy, but I can hear just adding low drone in places and then a big ominous synth wash over the top. Don't trash it- it's got a lot of possibility!

Bravo! Bravo!

I think it's too long, not enough variation, and needs at least some filtering. Might try a cello next time, or maybe a harmonica.

@Bethan: thanks... something like "Passing of the comet" would have been a much better title :)

@igor: it's often the way with poetry, no? But you offer an interesting historical footnote :) But, in a sense, the poem is a distraction.

Really nice Bruce. I do wish I could figure out improvFriday. Every time I think about it I go to the site and have no clue what to do next or how people upload or even if they are welcome to. It's all so baffling.

Like I said for the demo, really strong track with a great sound & vocal. I like this one very much.

@igor: words fail me :) @sister: thank you :)

@Bethan: thanks... my imagery was of drifting far out on the edge of the solar system. A very similar feel... down in the inky depths.

Like your sound and the vocal, good track.

That's pretty cool. Wasn't sure what to expect, but I like it.

That was quite a trip!

Cool track.

Loved this as soon as I heard it. You've really nailed the crunchy yet spacey guitar texture and I think the two blend well together. Greater than the sum of it's parts!

Really cool. Geas is right, but you gotta play the UK!!

@wg: My plan to have Professor Plum take the fall has come to naught I see :)

@bethan: thanks, that's an evocative image, i like it.

@Johnny: thanks, i think it shows some promise :)

Grungy and great!

@Sis: Have to be careful of things swooping on you strangely :)

Even your rehearsals are ACE! :)