This one is more of a reading set to music of part of a piece i wrote about a place i used to live. We used to walk most days down into the valley and i long to be back there, hopefully one day i will ...
There are a few fluffs in the reading…
This one is more of a reading set to music of part of a piece i wrote about a place i used to live. We used to walk most days down into the valley and i long to be back there, hopefully one day i will ...
There are a few fluffs in the reading…
what a wonderful mix of story telling and music,,,,are/were you a lit major??? ,,you have an amazing gift of word... you have a new fan,, recommend this to all( don't worry about the length ))!!!
This one is more of a reading set to music of part of a piece i wrote about a place i used to live. We used to walk most days down into the valley and i long to be back there, hopefully one day i will ...
There are a few fluffs in the reading…
Familiar scent of basil wilting on the sill.
Catalogs. Shopping lists. An empty pepper mill.
Weathered collar. Faded tag. You never could let go.
Untouched pen. Empty page. I guess we'll never know.
No, I'm not the lucky one whose voice…
So my wife hosts a YouTube channel called Coffee with Crones. 3 witches regularly meet to discuss witchy things and have a huge following around the world. She found out that royalties were taken from her for using other people's copywriter music…
**Song-writing Demo for FAWM 2025**
Song number 01
Written Saturday-Sunday 1st-2nd February 2025
Written 1st-2nd Feb
Demo recorded 2nd Feb
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I wasn't gonna do this FAWM thing this year, but they sent me an email...
And then I wrote…
Song 9# for my 2025 RPM Challenge. The finishing line is near. I wrote this song last night - it emerged out of the burning heart ache I've experienced since the death of my beloved 13 year old dog Maxwell (died last May) - my love for him is…
Sometimes writing a song is the very best and only thing you can do....
Cold Winter Moon
Oh cold winter moon
And the wind that blows
Bring me a change
For my weary soul
Take away this longing
That fills my heart
Something is over…
My words, ai demo.
Your clothes are in the wardrobe
And your books are on the shelf
I wander from room to room
Talking quietly to myself
How can I see my future
When you’re standing in the way?
Every morning I wake up, I’m in
Tomorrow…
Guitars/Mandolin: Doug Sparling
Composer: Traditional
Recorded: 2005
A couple of nice reels played on guitar, the first is The Cup of Tea, can't remember the name of the second one. Unfortunately my midi flute scratch track got added in the mix…
(Song 4)
Hair net tossed on the table
Name tag still pinned to my shirt
Work boots wait on the front step
but they might walk out on me too
I've got no one left to care for
No one left to hear my prayer
Talking to the kitchen window…
this is all chris. except i went the route of playing synthesized drums, which was a gas. at one time i couldn't stand the sound of them. but i knew they would fit his song. i think this is a very interesting journey.
A strange beast that began back in 2021 as a chord progression that didn't go anywhere. I finally knuckled down and finished it. It has a somewhat awkward transition from verse to chorus, but when I tried shifting either to accommodate the other…
Comments on thetworegs's stuff
You sound so believeable. Excellent work. If you loved her so much, why were you difficult and mean? Yeah well, I hate to say it, but I told you so!!
Very tinkly and pretty. Nicely done.
Ooo, listen to you, spouting lyrical. You should consider writing for gainful employment. This is excellent and very interesting.
Nice mate great story. This is really good mate.
what a wonderful mix of story telling and music,,,,are/were you a lit major??? ,,you have an amazing gift of word... you have a new fan,, recommend this to all( don't worry about the length ))!!!
This is really good mate. Great sound mate.
Nice one mate top job on the keys mate. Great mix. Thanks for your recent comments mate.
Very nice regs..! So peacefull.. But i must train my ears to understand english better.
At first I was frightened by the length of this but my goodness this is soulful goodness. Great job with the keys...yeah baby!
Damn this is cool...Laurie Anderson meets Tom Waits. I always new they'd hit it off and this is proof!
Love the vocals.
has an oompa loompa appeal...completely whacked.
love how this starts, and the feeling of it
she'll be back for the stuff:) .......damn those memories...as for this..just another brilliant lyrical adventure.
you write touching lyrics
the melody here strikes me
my name is hot wheels, I'm n alcoholic...hi hot wheels.. personally, Sake was my 'wine' of choice.
cool story telling
great composition!
your voice is just awesome on this!!
Comments made by thetworegs
Loving it
Why is the pepper mill always empty? On another note lovely sad song emotion filled vocal with great lyrics
I think this will do the job it certainly casts a spell
Laid back and lovely…
That bass is shaking the car down and dirty
Another year older waiting for your FAWN 26 submission
Poor old Maxwell at least he was loved
I’m liking the piano sounds like a real one rather than midi but I’m probably wrong
Got a great 80’s vibe going with that synth
The UK stops on 2 inches of snow good luck with the next 3 months were hoping not to drown in all this rain
A beautiful song beautifully sung
Great vocal
smooth as butter
Excellent
Smooth excellence vocal and backer
Slick recording
nice string work
excellent productions and vocal great lyrics "Talking to the kitchen window Like someone out there still cares"
they work treat it sounds like you both had a blast
That was a ride