Wonderful lyric! Lovely laid back atmosphere. Niiiice guitar work!

I hadda go and play this after a long day with very light lunch, right as it's getting to be dinner time. Working in Prague this week - now I gotta find me a Czech greasy spoon. It'll be beer, not coffee.

I like the pulse of this song. Nice job Greg.

love the guitar work, good greasy food, one of the best ways to use your mouth. I can think of one or two more

Love the hesitation guitar/this is a smooth rocking tune of a most excellent degree.

Now this is right up my alley...a song about food!!! great lyrics Greg.....very nice guitar fills in the background...

Smooth as silk Greg

a very lovely moment in musical time,, very very well done

Excellenttt.

Beautiful.

Man- this has it going on! Great sounds! So sweet!

What a PRO! A fine tune Greg. I really enjoyed that.

What is that rhythm sound, Damn . I cant figure this out

Ah now, I should have saved this one for last before bedtime. Ah, really nice Greg!

Remember when Rick was in his office and Jim dropped his pen on the floor. Jim had to lay his head on his desk to reach his pen. Rick thought he had a heat attack and was afraid he may have to give him mouth to mouth. Of course Rick told the story so good he had us all cracking up. I still miss those days. Great group of people. Super One was growing so fast and everyone's sales were way up and we just had fun. Is Rick retired?

Really nice. Great acoustic guitar work, nice vocals. Evocative lyrics that fit the music well. Well done!

Just a few stories recieved on email regarding our friend: Eric always tells the store about when Jim was trying to get into his little Buick Skylark to go to lunch. Of course because Jim was so big he had to hold on the top of the car and lower himself in. Well Eric decides to wash his windshield and shoots washer fluid all over Jim while he's stuck trying to get in the car. Eric had to pay to dry clean his suit. __________________________________ I've been thinking lately of all the stories about him. Like when I would take him out to lunch. He'd order some big thing like the broiled trout, toss salad with oil and vinegar and more. Then the waitress would look at me. I would say "I'll have what Dad's having". He would erupt claiming "I'm not your father you Bastard!" Good Times ... Good Times! I still giggle when I think about some of his antics. ______________________________________ I remember when he bought his first BMW. I asked him what kind of millage he got. He said "Who gives a shit" ______________________________________ I was in his office trying to present some promotion. He dropped his head on the desk when I mentioned the price, and it scared the hell out of me. I thought he had a heart attack, and I was going to have to give him mouth to mouth

Guitar sounds really sweet...is that the new one? Really professional sounding recording...

He was always a loner, But didn't despair, He strum, And he strum, And he strum. singing

~slowly the river flows, it bears me there where I never was~

Nice one Keith. I even dug out the headphones to take another listen. Great song writing! I just pulls you in.

I suspect Part 3 is coming soon. I enjoyed the originality of this story/song concept. Fun to listen to. I kept thinking of my niece, a young and budding actress. I could see her and her friends performing this on stage. You might have a new career waiting for you . . . Playwrite.

Love It! You are the Master!

That's pretty neat

Good Story!

Oh Yeah . . . I get an instant smile when I listen to this. Over the top . . . The only way to go.

Not what I expected, but definitely fun to listen to.

I liked the early version, but that's just me.

Like a breath of fresh air. Nice one Jane. First original song? Well Done!

It's a winner Roger! Just makes you feel good.

I like that sound of open tuned strings. Nice one Kavin!

Sweet lonely sound.

I think Norm hit it . . . It sounds like a GREAT new beginning to me too.

Great way to convey what everyone is thinking . . . at least I hope we're all thinking that.

Stunning Work! Excellent.

WOW . . . . . . . Absolutely Beautiful!

You have captured him! Live Forever Tom Jones!

Wil . . . You have something special going on here.

Nice job on the poetry, and very interesting music.

Beautiful Song! This is just a GREAT REFRESHING SOUND.