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That beer on the table yours or mine? I only left the room for a short time. If you've gone and switched them I'm gonna be sad, Cos that beer was the best one that I ever had. Don't drink my beer, you hear? I'm counting to 4 just to make…
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Reefwalker said

Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

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Synths are meant to represent the fast beating heart of the technological city, with its busy trains and industrious people. The breathing is life, and the cheerful keyboard is supposed to be the fun and excitement of life in a city with a flourishing…
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Thanks Brett

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Synths are meant to represent the fast beating heart of the technological city, with its busy trains and industrious people. The breathing is life, and the cheerful keyboard is supposed to be the fun and excitement of life in a city with a flourishing…
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Brett Warren said

very cool.

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Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

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Tom said

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

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AMUC said

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

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doktordoktor said

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

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Thanks fairynuff : )

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Tom said

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

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Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

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doktordoktor said

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

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Tom said

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

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richardlaceves said

nice..

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doktordoktor said

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

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Tom said

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

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doktordoktor said

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

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Tom said

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

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He can't play nicely or share his toys He always takes from the other boys Got no time for music or vids Doesn't act like the other kids Does Donald Don't let Donald play He's gonna spoil your day Believe his words if you must But only…
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I hear you, brother.

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He can't play nicely or share his toys He always takes from the other boys Got no time for music or vids Doesn't act like the other kids Does Donald Don't let Donald play He's gonna spoil your day Believe his words if you must But only…
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doktordoktor said

Thank you fairynuff!

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He can't play nicely or share his toys He always takes from the other boys Got no time for music or vids Doesn't act like the other kids Does Donald Don't let Donald play He's gonna spoil your day Believe his words if you must But only…
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doktordoktor said

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

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