Water Under Water
January challenge songwriting fun…
WATER UNDER WATER
So near the surface
So near the end
So near the purpose
Time and again
Just barely breathing
I’ll need you when
I’m floating in the water under water
Holding on loosely
Without letting go
So much to lose
Above and below
Life is so fleeting
You already know
I’m floating in the water under water
If I can only keep my eyes closed
And fight off the burning desire to breathe
Stay here with you as the time slows
Maybe you wouldn’t leave me
Floating in the water under water
I love you too much
To tell you how much
I love you
Very cool, gonna be a good rpm for you if this is an indication. I can hear some atmospheric guitarplay under this..
Excellent songmenship here Keith. Really enjoying the chord/vocal progressions.
Nice one Keith. I even dug out the headphones to take another listen. Great song writing! I just pulls you in.
Super Arrangement . Great writing here. You and Greg Connor are my two heros when it comes to one voice one guitar. Faved Keith.