I didn't like the 1st version so i changed it so here it is. imagine Sitting in the forest listening to the breeze being free and wanting to follow it..........................
Reg told her it all, then he had to leave. His new flat has a bit of a gloom about it on this morning when he wakes to the Buzz of the Tv....................
Reg told her it all, then he had to leave. His new flat has a bit of a gloom about it on this morning when he wakes to the Buzz of the Tv....................
The backing really captures the bleakness of the lyric. I like how the spoken lyric drew me in, yet was part of the rythm of the piece as well. Really nice.
I didn't like the 1st version so i changed it so here it is. imagine Sitting in the forest listening to the breeze being free and wanting to follow it..........................
It does create a palpable sense of yearning. What a sweet melodious/countermelodious listen. Great use of the jaw harp too, if that's what I'm hearing. (my set-up isn't perfect at present).
Familiar scent of basil wilting on the sill.
Catalogs. Shopping lists. An empty pepper mill.
Weathered collar. Faded tag. You never could let go.
Untouched pen. Empty page. I guess we'll never know.
No, I'm not the lucky one whose voice…
So my wife hosts a YouTube channel called Coffee with Crones. 3 witches regularly meet to discuss witchy things and have a huge following around the world. She found out that royalties were taken from her for using other people's copywriter music…
**Song-writing Demo for FAWM 2025**
Song number 01
Written Saturday-Sunday 1st-2nd February 2025
Written 1st-2nd Feb
Demo recorded 2nd Feb
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I wasn't gonna do this FAWM thing this year, but they sent me an email...
And then I wrote…
Song 9# for my 2025 RPM Challenge. The finishing line is near. I wrote this song last night - it emerged out of the burning heart ache I've experienced since the death of my beloved 13 year old dog Maxwell (died last May) - my love for him is…
Sometimes writing a song is the very best and only thing you can do....
Cold Winter Moon
Oh cold winter moon
And the wind that blows
Bring me a change
For my weary soul
Take away this longing
That fills my heart
Something is over…
My words, ai demo.
Your clothes are in the wardrobe
And your books are on the shelf
I wander from room to room
Talking quietly to myself
How can I see my future
When you’re standing in the way?
Every morning I wake up, I’m in
Tomorrow…
Guitars/Mandolin: Doug Sparling
Composer: Traditional
Recorded: 2005
A couple of nice reels played on guitar, the first is The Cup of Tea, can't remember the name of the second one. Unfortunately my midi flute scratch track got added in the mix…
(Song 4)
Hair net tossed on the table
Name tag still pinned to my shirt
Work boots wait on the front step
but they might walk out on me too
I've got no one left to care for
No one left to hear my prayer
Talking to the kitchen window…
this is all chris. except i went the route of playing synthesized drums, which was a gas. at one time i couldn't stand the sound of them. but i knew they would fit his song. i think this is a very interesting journey.
A strange beast that began back in 2021 as a chord progression that didn't go anywhere. I finally knuckled down and finished it. It has a somewhat awkward transition from verse to chorus, but when I tried shifting either to accommodate the other…
I come up to the surface
And take a breath on my return
Crystal waters on the surface
Light gets swallowed down below
And it’s the same way with my feelings
About you they stay much the same
Twenty years wrapped up in paper
Tied it up…
Comments on thetworegs's stuff
I need to listen to more of your tracks mate. You have some gems here. This is great mate.
hopefully he's rockin' and rollin'
Oh Yes mate I like what you have done. Not an easy one for the vocals nice one. Thank you for that mate.
This makes me think of the type of song that would probably have been sung tongue in cheek in a 30's speak-easy in the Bronx lol. Brilliant.
A very apt title..I'm loving this wall of sound.
Amazing sound mate great vocals.
Nice one mate great sound happening in this very cool. Thanks for your comments mate.
Nice regs!!
nice smoothie flourished sounds here!
-cool texture, dr.!
..dig the intro drums sound here; how did you record'm?
You never fail to remind me of retro detective movies - slinky, cool and timeless!
great groovy song regs!
:)
Groovy!
your soul is motown~!
:) Very entertaining!
The backing really captures the bleakness of the lyric. I like how the spoken lyric drew me in, yet was part of the rythm of the piece as well. Really nice.
It does create a palpable sense of yearning. What a sweet melodious/countermelodious listen. Great use of the jaw harp too, if that's what I'm hearing. (my set-up isn't perfect at present).
digging this afro-rythm-blues fusion. Talk about 'roots', you've reached the tippy end here! Why can't I be this cool?
Comments made by thetworegs
Why is the pepper mill always empty? On another note lovely sad song emotion filled vocal with great lyrics
I think this will do the job it certainly casts a spell
Laid back and lovely…
That bass is shaking the car down and dirty
Another year older waiting for your FAWN 26 submission
Poor old Maxwell at least he was loved
I’m liking the piano sounds like a real one rather than midi but I’m probably wrong
Got a great 80’s vibe going with that synth
The UK stops on 2 inches of snow good luck with the next 3 months were hoping not to drown in all this rain
A beautiful song beautifully sung
Great vocal
smooth as butter
Excellent
Smooth excellence vocal and backer
Slick recording
nice string work
excellent productions and vocal great lyrics "Talking to the kitchen window Like someone out there still cares"
they work treat it sounds like you both had a blast
That was a ride
You vocal drew me in ….