I don't know why, but for a few seconds I hated this, then my brain wised up :) Excellent track!! and as everybody else has mentioned - great vocal. Look forward to your album this year :)

Great voice man, love the vocals too. All around great track.

very excellent,, your poetry is striking,,, and your music ain't bad either (bit of a joke, since of course the music is very good),

That is a soulful vocal. Clearly you're a man to watch this year.

Love the opening mix of instruments on this. Inspired ... and then that wonderful vocal. Great track altogether.

excellent vocal

Spiffy guitar work.

You get some great sounds.... Cool chorus.

Striking vocals Alex. Spirited tune... Was that a distorted kazoo lead? :)

Damn Nice! Wish someone would tell me that secret as well

personal and haunting,,,

Great song...really captivating. A very soulful sound...really moving.

Glad to hear you're alive (and breathing!)

Excellent song excellently sung

Great track Alex!

I love this track Alex, you and Gary make a great team!

Very good tracks you got! Cool voice and instruments! Keep it up =) --------------------

cool!!! nice rhythm :)

Ps Superb track though, mis-heard or not.

Evening old boy - I've done something fairly bizarre with this track. When I first got hold of the cd, before I had acccess to the lyrics, I completely misinterpeted (and mis-heard) them. I've written down what I thought I heard, which makes the words come from the point of view of a manipulative (and probably abusive), but slightly ashamed partner. I'll let you have then sometime, for interest. (Probably the greatest insult you can ever pay a songwriter!) Rad

perfect accompaniment to my relaxing sunday morning bathtime.. cheers!

very dreamy.. conjures a nice image

What a great idea this is.. the melody and the delivery of it contrast perfectly to create something unique. chipper

charming.. very..

nothing valuable to offer critique wise i'm afraid, other than to say that as usual this was thoroughly enjoyed.

reminds me of something.. think it might be corpses in their mouths by ian brown.. but only in a mild way.. great feel.. very delicate

great playing chappy.. lovely stuff

This is brilliant. I need to give this album a proper listen once I've wrapped up the challenge (nearly there!) - in fact I need to listen to loads of the finished articles.. anyone know if there will be a big page of them like last year... Su?!

love hearing harmonica in something this dark and heavy.. brilliant. great sound on the riff too. nice one chappy!

this is class! reminds me of some of the kinks stuff.. perfick

this is brilliant. great sound to it (especially the vocals). and the lyrics are class

wouldnt have thought that would work.. mario on his keyboard and luigi playin mad ass drums.. it does though, infectious, and its going to be playin in my head when i try and sleep tonight.. thanks for that ;)

wow.. that was incredible.

here's the first Gary!! Thanks again so much for all the help...

i like rhythm track A, I like rhythm track B, but which is better? There's only one way to find out.. fight!!

really enjoyed this. quite a journey.. glad i had my headphones on for it or else i might have missed bits. Bass is so fat too, great sound..

oh my god.. amazing guitars!

love the harmonica on this one..

im living this song at the momment! great track.. reminds me of what i like about shel silverstein/dr. hook. Also shades of Nilsson when he was feeling jovial.. I love that stuff! Loving the crazy middle section too.. Thanks for the comments by the way.. much appreciated!

absolutely no hesitation is saying it all works. lyrics, mix, the lot. cracking stuff this. really really like this.