Again i'd love some feedback
I like the feel and the mix
do the lyrics work?
recorded t'night in an hour after trying all day to get the verse lyrics rammed into another tune
I keep writing songs about communism, for some reason. I thought it was slightly amusing to discover that Mashino actually IS an industrial town. Sounds like "Machine". Get it? Get it??
this was an attempt at making a tune where the vocal melody was nonredundant with the chords (or never found in any of the notes of any of the chords).
Almost succeeded - but it was fun trying.
this was an attempt at making a tune where the vocal melody was nonredundant with the chords (or never found in any of the notes of any of the chords).
Almost succeeded - but it was fun trying.
I keep writing songs about communism, for some reason. I thought it was slightly amusing to discover that Mashino actually IS an industrial town. Sounds like "Machine". Get it? Get it??
Just one of those passing moods. Just finished today - august 2 2009. I resisted the temptation to try to develop it any further and just let it be what it is
Matter Of Fate- This song started as a riff I was doing while tuning my guitar. It sounded cool, so I happened to record it on a small dictation recorder I have so I wouldn’t forget it. When I listened to the riff it just screamed Sticky Fingers…
Hi folks,
It's good to back after RPM and the blackout of 2010.
A couple firsts here. I recorded this 100% with the computer. I never plugged in to a computer before.
I've always used a Roland VS machine and burnt my
songs/tracks to SCSI…
This is a collaboration with a wonderful young artist - Craig Mathieson. Craig is a tremendous talent, a great guitar player, and just an all around good guy. His album just dropped and you can hear more of his music at the following:
http…
This is probably to personal, to raw to put here, but I've been listening to some pretty courageous stuff here in alonetone. This is more of an occurence, a onetime performance, more of a memorial, than a recording. My dad had died recently, I…
Simple little song. My view on how love really falls apart. Last verse is in my opinion an add-on. I wrote it after the rest, at the behest of someone who thought it was too "un-hopeful". It may have been a goood thing.
A Song About an old Saying......
Sh*t Happens......
Lyrics
T.Mokbul 2010
-In A Day-
Half a Glass of Gasoline
Mixed with Some Kerosene
Stirred in with Coffee
Laced with amphetamine
All That it Takes in A Day
To get by…
Well, the truth is I run a little hot. I think maybe all artists do. Creative fire is creative fire. Sorry about the vocals here, this is the scratch track, didn't have time to lay down the real thing before the clock struck twelve and I turned…
I don't think there is anything wrong with the vocals on this one, spot on I would say. I love your voice. It's a combination of Tom Waits and David Bowie - and what feels like years spent paying your dues. I'm a fan.
A quick little tune written in appreciation of a small expression of contentedness.
I can see in that little smile
You're living for the moment
Every once in a little while I catch it
No one else could match it
You're more than meets the eye
This is probably to personal, to raw to put here, but I've been listening to some pretty courageous stuff here in alonetone. This is more of an occurence, a onetime performance, more of a memorial, than a recording. My dad had died recently, I…
Simple little song. My view on how love really falls apart. Last verse is in my opinion an add-on. I wrote it after the rest, at the behest of someone who thought it was too "un-hopeful". It may have been a goood thing.
Thanks for all the great comments. Any of my stuff you want to sing on, you go right ahead. I do live in Oregon, moved here in 2004 to retire and play music. It's been wonderful.
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I think the lyrics work great - I love them. Amazing song all around...in my favorites.
FN Great! I really dig the vocals. Mashino Beano!
La cucaracha, la cucaracha, ya no puede caminar porque no tiene, porque le falta marihuana pa' fumar haha. put that in yer pipe and smoke it!!!
La cucaracha, la cucaracha, ya no puede caminar porque no tiene, porque le falta marihuana pa' fumar haha. put that in yer pipe and smoke it!!!
I Love this frickin' song dude!
That was the best 1:39 of my entire day. Wow.
one of my favorite tunes from rpm and oh,one of my favorites period.
so much emotion coming out of that piece of wood.really nice.
Am I the only one who's noticing the Todd Rundgren vibe going on here? Awesome.
nice computer sound,, what program do you use?
Way too much fun!
Really nice! Loving the guitar playing!
stunningly powerful.
Interesting instrumental,, seems to be based on a few simple notes (meaning good) with a few minor variataions, good background music
love the vibe. very velvet u . but really nice in its own way. well done.
great tune..nice lyrics and flow
I don't think there is anything wrong with the vocals on this one, spot on I would say. I love your voice. It's a combination of Tom Waits and David Bowie - and what feels like years spent paying your dues. I'm a fan.
Very nice, pleasant like being touched by a beam of warm sunlight
This is a marvelous soundscape - intense, raw, yet somehow soothing. Brilliant work!!
Thanks for all the great comments. Any of my stuff you want to sing on, you go right ahead. I do live in Oregon, moved here in 2004 to retire and play music. It's been wonderful.