Wow!!! This is really nice. Love all the layers

Awww... this is fabulous. What a cool piece of songwriting. Love it.

I like it, nice to try something different..great lyrics as usual....and as Steve says..a real keeper!!

WELL GREG A REAL KEEPER. No ,You should pitch this one its got that it thing that I love to hear. its soo good that I want some royalties too. You are back 5 #####s. did I say Wow

Super cool track - loving the message and the delivery!

Aww this is a really cool song. Love the imagery.

First class Greg

An instant classic Greg! I love the lyrics. I imagine some of this was inspired by your hope for sailing to come indeed.

Great playing and singing....now if you could only dance!!!!! sorry, getting a little bit of cabin fever. you can stop dancing now. all joking aside ...another outstanding song. Love it. I think you have written more songs than Dolly by now.

I really like the sound and lyrics. Well done!

very inspired song Cool minimal setuo and great vocals good one! KC

GREAT Sound. Guitar/bass/voice. Crystal clear. Perfect with the lyric.

Liked the leads very syncopated against the solid rhythm . Yummy harmonized back singing. Very good indeed

Nice job! I like the lyrics and the beat.

super!

Oh yeah, nice one guys.

Good job!

well hello Rodger, man its been a while. the co write collaboration is a fine art . we are back. hope to "See" you Thursday ..... The Grey Silkie

Love it Greg .

You guys are so cool!!!! Love it!!!!!

This is Fun! We may have to do this again in a few weeks. I'm planning to sing this live tomorrow night at the Rosemont Jam. Harley will be playing bass. We could use some harmony if you are free. I wrote another verse, subject to approval and Tweaking: Broken Windows throwing stones I don’t know how to heal these bones I tripped and fell hurt more than my pride If only my woman was by my side I’ve been down this road before I found myself on the cold hard floor I picked myself up and carried on Now my woman, now she’s gone Honey I’m comin, home to you A broken man, who’s sad and Blue I need you back, and I’ll be true Honey I’m comin home to you I’ve spend my life, in foolish ways Makin bad decisions, and then I pay And it hurts me more, than you know I’m Comin home again, broken so MORE WINE!

I remember a long time a go, there was a band called "It's a Beautiful Day". They had a song called "White Bird". I don't know why, but this song reminds me of that sound. I love it. Very retro sounding guitar too.

Nice picking and bending!

Refreshing . . . . You have a great style.

Holy Cow !!!!!!!!!!

Outstanding Colleen! All three of these songs recorded at F5 Studio are excellent.

Wow . . . Talk about involking images. This is neat. This would make GREAT background music for the "Talk Like a Pirate" Challenge going on right now. http://alonetone.com/forums/making-music/topics/challenge-pirate-some-music

I like that touch of adding new instrument voicing at different times of the song. It freshens everything up. Well done.

Tranquil and inviting! The loop that comes in at the end is a great idea, but it distracted me from the easy listening.

. . I Love It !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is GREAT Fun.

It's hard to pick a favorite, but this just might be it. Well done Colleen!

Foot Tapping Good.

Arrrrrr . ....... I started me morning out right for a change! A great listen and a darn good chuckle. That damn parot in the background was good entertainment and the perfect balance to you lilting song.

You always have the most refreshing and honest songs! I once had someone call me selling a security system. I told them "I don't need it." They will only come in here once.

Now . . . This puts me in the mood !!! Nice contribution to the challenge.

Excellent . . . especially for a "just for fun" project.

My feet started tapping immediately!

Beautiful song and professional presentation!

This gets the blood pumping!

I love the banter! You guys sound like you know how to have fun!