The mannequins! They're ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Never throw anything you've created away. I've come close and always been happy about keeping stuff later. As to this track, supercool. Especially when that buzzy thing comes sweeping through. Awesome.

whew, good thing you kept this one. I like the chime.

grimey!

Like it! Especially the beats, halfway through I was thinking of wailing robots echoing through a very large spaceship

And thank you all guys. It's great to get feedback :)

MM: Well ... it hadn't occurred to me but I did just buy my first dub album and listen to it today ... maybe it did influence me.

So far the comments have been about the sounds and their scariness. For me, however, the magic comes from those sounds used with a fairly funky and happy motif. The juxtaposition is very cool. Strange as it sounds, I hear a dub influence (cue you saying WTF?!?)

OK, eeeeasy. Move away from the sharp objects. ...Possibly reserve more intelligent listens/comments until the morning, but suffice to say, I think you probably achieved what you set out to achieve. *scared*

okay, sandbags, time for a scary clown avatar. this one will make it difficult to turn out the light tonight.

So *that's* what a space trumpet sounds like. I had always wondered.

Like this nice and raw nice one

Hard to pass up a great title like this one. ;) (Excellent use of Augustus Loop, btw...)

*hides*

I never know what to say while I'm listening to this but I have to keep coming back and listen again!

Ooh twinkly and thought-provoking. Makes me think of the ghost of a child following someone and hiding quickly behind corners and in doorways whenever the person being followed turns to look. I hear churchbells too. Haunting!

Suspenceful...with ambient and cinematic overtones. One to really get the imagination working.

Atmospheric with a world beauty.

Wow- There should be a film to go with this. I'm not going to see it alone though!! Great sounds

Sounds good here! It turns my sunny green garden into the Outback!!

Bravo! Bravo!

I think it's too long, not enough variation, and needs at least some filtering. Might try a cello next time, or maybe a harmonica.

@Bethan: thanks... something like "Passing of the comet" would have been a much better title :)

@igor: it's often the way with poetry, no? But you offer an interesting historical footnote :) But, in a sense, the poem is a distraction.

Really nice Bruce. I do wish I could figure out improvFriday. Every time I think about it I go to the site and have no clue what to do next or how people upload or even if they are welcome to. It's all so baffling.

Like I said for the demo, really strong track with a great sound & vocal. I like this one very much.

@igor: words fail me :) @sister: thank you :)

@Bethan: thanks... my imagery was of drifting far out on the edge of the solar system. A very similar feel... down in the inky depths.

Like your sound and the vocal, good track.

That's pretty cool. Wasn't sure what to expect, but I like it.

That was quite a trip!

Cool track.

Loved this as soon as I heard it. You've really nailed the crunchy yet spacey guitar texture and I think the two blend well together. Greater than the sum of it's parts!

Really cool. Geas is right, but you gotta play the UK!!

@wg: My plan to have Professor Plum take the fall has come to naught I see :)

@bethan: thanks, that's an evocative image, i like it.

@Johnny: thanks, i think it shows some promise :)

Grungy and great!

@Sis: Have to be careful of things swooping on you strangely :)

Even your rehearsals are ACE! :)