hello again friend,, a major story begins...? as i have said prior your story telling is wonderful, i also find it very picturesque, your words create images, imagery, that is quite strong, like the pieces you make and share,,, take care R
Reg is addicted to this new lady who has started to frequent down at the cellar she appears as if by magic late in the evening and then seems to disappear before Reg can get close.....
The relationship is going wrong. You suddenly realize that those so called friends of yours are paying a little bit too much attention to your honey................ (Take 2 remixed to see if i could get the voice cleaner)
With his lottery money Reg has invested in becoming a funk star. The other reg came up with the tune and Reg jumped all over the thing......come and get funky with thetwoReg
hey reg[s? - i am assuming from the profile pic that the two of you are uncomfortably compelled to share a body (just as you will be able to deduce from mine that i am not actually a real life sockpuppet but only a cartoon one))] - i really enjoyed that (from the opening bars where i thought it was going to be a cover of the doors) - is there to be a pt.2? or is is it a time loop & pts2etal are identical? do you do "rock" "operas"? do you think you should?
i love it - xs
Reg is back in love the broken heart has healed and he wants to tell the world .........
ONLY YOU (Lyrics)
I surrender my life
I surrender my dreams
I surrender my thoughts
Because it’s true i love you
I love only
You are the sun…
Reg stood by the mirror and peered in at himself, he didn't recognise who he saw, the image that peered back out at him didn't resemble who he thought he was and it shook him to his core.............because he thought, he, the man he recognises…
...and after all we're only ordinary men.
Me, and you, and Reggy one...
God only knows it's noz what we would choose to do.
Forward! - he cried from the cellar
and the front rank died... (curtains)
(PF/DSOM, relaxed)
Well Reg is a touch concerned about his new love Lorraine who has been missing for last two days and she's not answering his calls and his getting a little touchy about it ....a little insecure to be truthful........................
Who do…
Reg stood by the mirror and peered in at himself, he didn't recognise who he saw, the image that peered back out at him didn't resemble who he thought he was and it shook him to his core.............because he thought, he, the man he recognises…
Vocals: Tricia Dovidio
Lyrics: Bob Beckley
Composed, arranged & mixed by Steffen Offermann
This one was tricky to do because the piano does not play at a fixed tempo, and it was an online collaboration (like all my collaborations).
EDIT final version now posted and the page turning is gone but i left this intro as is in case anyone is reading the comments. Does anyone read the comments? or the intro?
i turn a page somewhere in the middle of all this - you'd think i would…
it had got a hold of me by 15 sec... oooh yeh the wind did blow......just like the rest....a fantastic album.... if i was king ..... i would give you a tital...arise Sir Gumbo.....master of guitar and vocal
Can i get a little whisky in this water said John
The day the world stopped being fair
I didnt know what to say so I said yeah.
I poured a double whisky and I placed it in his hand
And said friend, only true friends understand
He said friend…
It aint like no ones done this before
But how can you tire of beautiful chords
In the fifties
In Tenessee
Where my love
was born
Two young men upped and
crossed the yard
both cold cos it was rainin hard.
One of them turned said…
This celtic folk piece is a collaboration with lyricist Donna Devine.
This is Donna's explanation:
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Background: In earlier centuries, young men were captured by "press gangs" - often literally torn away from…
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way out there - clever and original. I would like to see this live on stage.
Thanks Everyone for listening........
where do you start here>>? just great reg I dont have any good comparisons for this. your music inserts are perfect
hello again friend,, a major story begins...? as i have said prior your story telling is wonderful, i also find it very picturesque, your words create images, imagery, that is quite strong, like the pieces you make and share,,, take care R
Slinky cool! (Reg - I should try flowers though. Seriously.)
Awesome! What's a "honey trap"?
How did I miss this classic??? Mmmmm, mmmm, mmmm - this is wonderful funky goodness! Outstanding!!!!
Wildly entertaining!
Careful, your genius is showing.
hey reg[s? - i am assuming from the profile pic that the two of you are uncomfortably compelled to share a body (just as you will be able to deduce from mine that i am not actually a real life sockpuppet but only a cartoon one))] - i really enjoyed that (from the opening bars where i thought it was going to be a cover of the doors) - is there to be a pt.2? or is is it a time loop & pts2etal are identical? do you do "rock" "operas"? do you think you should? i love it - xs
and the excellence of the music should be overlooked too.
Reg - you are one heck of a story teller! Have you considered writing a novel or short story?
Great stuff!!! So well done!!! (And thanks for your kind thoughts about some of my songs!!!) ---John in Seattle
Loving the melancholy Reg. I mean, I don't *want* him to have troubles, but am enjoying it from afar.
Isn't enough, bro. Sing your opera 'till...
...and after all we're only ordinary men. Me, and you, and Reggy one... God only knows it's noz what we would choose to do. Forward! - he cried from the cellar and the front rank died... (curtains) (PF/DSOM, relaxed)
Well, I would put it more precisely: the novice conductor. Budding, novice conductor Reg. That in itself not bad :-)
reg im drinkin one for you
im gonna venture from my exp. that a lady's actions have very little to do with me, no matter how intimate we are.
lovely dramatic singing, great
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Oh no ....its over.......the sky has gone Grey....Thank you
I'm getting a severe missed connections addiction just noticed i only have 4 left.... no ... no..i need more.... more
Your vocal to your tracks is like a whisper.. you are telling us a secret....only we the listener knows.....shhhh there's more....Beautiful
Go on kick her i dare you........
A beautiful love song
Love it...
i'm just so impressed ...your vocal, lyrics ....has drawn me in.... i cant escape till the end ......not that want to...........
Bravo...Bravo
excellent
I should just fav them all .... lovin it a breath of fresh air
like Sandy says Love your stuff with a big L...
like listening to a thought beautifully done
ooooh yeah i'm staying to hear some more
loving it..... excellent approach ......
A beautiful vocal....a lovely track
it had got a hold of me by 15 sec... oooh yeh the wind did blow......just like the rest....a fantastic album.... if i was king ..... i would give you a tital...arise Sir Gumbo.....master of guitar and vocal
A pumping Fe-lion .......and like Wrinkkle says a touch of Prodigy.,... yeeeah loving that little vocal element....
Can I get a little whiskey in this water Said John ,the day the world stopped being fair a cracking start to an excellent song
This is beautiful ALex pardon the pun......
Beautiful the guitar and voice..............