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I am blind but I read you like I´m reading braille I´m half drunk but what is rushing through my veins Isn´t caffeine or alcohol though the kick feels much the same Blind, half drunk I stumble but I’ll get up and try again I must have said a…
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rinyville said

Thanks for the comments. Really appreciate it....I know I should listen to others more often but I can't always find the time for it (yes, I feel guilty).

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I am blind but I read you like I´m reading braille I´m half drunk but what is rushing through my veins Isn´t caffeine or alcohol though the kick feels much the same Blind, half drunk I stumble but I’ll get up and try again I must have said a…
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Just Jane said

Pretty song, great lyrics x

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I am blind but I read you like I´m reading braille I´m half drunk but what is rushing through my veins Isn´t caffeine or alcohol though the kick feels much the same Blind, half drunk I stumble but I’ll get up and try again I must have said a…
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FDR said

Very nice,like the lyrics!

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I am blind but I read you like I´m reading braille I´m half drunk but what is rushing through my veins Isn´t caffeine or alcohol though the kick feels much the same Blind, half drunk I stumble but I’ll get up and try again I must have said a…
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Andrew Russe said

Nice one.

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I am blind but I read you like I´m reading braille I´m half drunk but what is rushing through my veins Isn´t caffeine or alcohol though the kick feels much the same Blind, half drunk I stumble but I’ll get up and try again I must have said a…
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Guest said

Good tune.

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A Dutch song.....my native language, wrote it yesterday
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stoman said

Riny, that's a fabulous song. I wish I could understand more - maybe if you post the lyrics, then I can read long (I don't speak Dutch, but I live at the Dutch border, so your language is at least not completely unfamiliar to my ears and eyes). Regards, Steffen

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A song without longing Echoes through the café All the drunks, all the junkies Sing as if they were praying The overweight waitress Dances, plays air guitar You left me with nothing But just a beer at the bar On a cardboard beer coaster You…
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FDR said

Like that,nice one!

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Oh bright morning star Draw me to your light How far do I have to travel How many lonely nights I don’t know where I’m heading Just don’t lead me astray In my search for tomorrow Or for a better day Oh bright morning star Draw me to your light…
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kirklynch said

Lovely song writing!

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Oh mama, there’s a battle in my head A raging fight About good and evil day and night and wrong and right Do I follow my instinct Without reason Is the truth just a word For an act of treason Am I whistling in darkness Or blinded by the light…
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Guest said

Great lyrics, coupled with an emotive vocal makes it a winner for me.

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I dreamt a piano with just a few keys With limitless chords and one melody Caught by a cloud who cried its last tear it fell on my window it’s been falling for years Ageless, weightless nameless, shameless Ageless, weightless nameless, shameless…
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Greg Connor said

I like the sound of that acoustic guitar with an open sounding tune complimented by the harmony. Very nice.

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There’s a fire in your eyes It burns, it bleeds A raging wind inside knocks me off my feet You light up like a sunbeam And you run through my bloodstream All the time Your light, it blinds My sight, my eyes I’m struck by lightning You’re forked…
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Greg Connor said

A lot of passion here. Nice going.

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There’s a fire in your eyes It burns, it bleeds A raging wind inside knocks me off my feet You light up like a sunbeam And you run through my bloodstream All the time Your light, it blinds My sight, my eyes I’m struck by lightning You’re forked…
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Guest said

Great tune. I would mix the vocal separate and add effects. But still good one.

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Guest said

A very moving/real song made more poignant by it's starkness. Love it

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thetworegs said

lovely song

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Let’s swim in these oceans On dolphins or whales Their bodies in motion Let’s hold on to their tails Let’s fly with the eagles Let’s soar through the skies and cry like the seagulls Let’s just fly Let’s sail into sunsets Let’s follow the tides…
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thetworegs said

and another......

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Oh bright morning star Draw me to your light How far do I have to travel How many lonely nights I don’t know where I’m heading Just don’t lead me astray In my search for tomorrow Or for a better day Oh bright morning star Draw me to your light…
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thetworegs said

lovely song well written and performed sounds like I'm in the room listening excellent.......

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The trees turned blue And the sky outside is yellow I hear you sigh While you dream of purple cellos I don’t in dream in colors baby nor in black and white and I can’t tell what’s up or down or wrong and right You turned blonde When I thought…
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stoman said

As pretty as I expected it to be. Your calm, relaxing songs are just perfect after a long day at work. Regards, Steffen

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The trees turned blue And the sky outside is yellow I hear you sigh While you dream of purple cellos I don’t in dream in colors baby nor in black and white and I can’t tell what’s up or down or wrong and right You turned blonde When I thought…
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Guest said

Great lyrics

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I spoke to the river She turned to the sea I remembered the days when she had been there for me She said I follow the curves I shed a few tears where the water might lead me I never feared I just follow the tides Every dusk, every dawn when…
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Guest said

Two bars in and I'm hooked. Great song/story

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She tiptoes through morning mist Turns around my soul is twisting When I bind my heart in longing and desire She lifts up her skirt when she wades In rivers and it’s then the fog fades With a teasing smile she sets my soul on fire Her smile…
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Wildgeas Music said

Sweet folky music. Crispy mix too. Nice.

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