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STAINED GLASS

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Here is my contribution to the latest song writing challenge offered by the Minnesota Songwriters.

(Write a song using the topic: GLASS) Everyone is welcome to participate.


STAINED GLASS

Guitar: Double Drop D tuning
Mandolin
Irish Whistle

D It’s a stained glass image
When I G look into your Em eyes
A All your color shining D through A
D And it took me quite a while
G Before I Em realized
A It’s the color that has
brought me here to D you

Bm Stained glass imperfections bending A images and hue
G Hides away what’s hidden deep A inside
Bm Transparency is not the way that A I think of you
It’s the G colored variations, Em imperfect presentation
It’s the Bm light I see A dancing in your D eyes

D And some would much prefer
A G clear look in your Em soul
A All those imperfections
Block their D view A
D But I would just explain
It’s the G color and the Em stain
That A open up my heart back to D you

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Sister Savage said

Tender writing, wonderful stuff.

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Johnny Stone said

Nice one mate dig it

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Ronald Walter said

Beautiful!

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Nick P said

Just wonderful....lyrics, voice, instruments come together beautifully

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vaisvil said

nice song!

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JR James said

Always good to hear your music....

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H R Music said

Great song. Love the concept.

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Buck Erpestad said

Lovely Greg - you hit all the right places.

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slkrell said

Came by for another listen. Damn that's sweet

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slkrell said

My my simply lovely : Smooth as glass .

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Radio Roswell said

Nice, love drop d tuning . Irish whistle too , go get me a Harp pint at the pub. Thanks for the comments. Appreciate it !

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Ron said

Very intelligent and insightful writing beautiful vocals as usual and did I mention I love your playing!! outstanding song Greg

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scottz said

nice...lets throw some mando on this, eh?

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Colleen Dillon said

just WOW!!!! This is one of my favorites you've done. Such a beautiful picture you paint. Love the instrumentation, and killer Irish Whistle. This one sets the bar high!!!!

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