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Rust

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A song I wrote today. Was done fairly quickly. Slightly different from the stuff i’ve been doing lately.

I try to breathe
But the air has turned to dust
I try to see
But my eyes have started to rust

I scratch your name
Into the flesh covering my bones
I start to bleed
emptying life
I don’t yet know

Ahhhhhhh
Ohhhhhhh

I climb a wall
Gravity always pulls me down
As I hit the ground
I shatter but don’t make a sound

I try to breathe
But the air has turned to dust
I try to see
But my eyes begin to rust

Ahhhhhhh
Ohhhhhhh
Begin to Rust…

Guest said

very nice, very dark.

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Johnny Stone said

Grat vocals mate all round great track.

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Wildgeas Music said

I enjoyed this track. Very professional.

Guest said

well done.great mix,rocks.

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richardlaceves said

a beautiful piece of music!! lyrics, instrumentals, mood/feeling, your voice mixes wonderfully with the music well done!!!!!

Guest said

Wow, BEAUTIFUL! Love the vocals and the teasing string motif! Great lyrics also!

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